[brasero/mallard-documentation] Corrections to help and improvements to the layout



commit 2b0f4ff977fff517c81e12580f65999e9d63174b
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 5 18:09:37 2011 +0200

    Corrections to help and improvements to the layout

 help/C/create-cover.page      |    8 ++++----
 help/C/introduction.page      |    5 ++---
 help/C/prob-dvd.page          |    6 ++++--
 help/C/project-audio.page     |    6 ++++++
 help/C/project-data.page      |    7 +++++++
 help/C/project-disc-copy.page |   16 +++++++++-------
 help/C/project-save.page      |   35 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------
 help/C/split-track.page       |    1 +
 8 files changed, 54 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/create-cover.page b/help/C/create-cover.page
index a6fb3d2..3dba3f3 100644
--- a/help/C/create-cover.page
+++ b/help/C/create-cover.page
@@ -55,11 +55,11 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click the <gui>Background properties</gui> toolbar icon to add a
       background for the current cover, or right click on the cover you wish to
-      edit and select <gui>Set Background Properties</gui>. You can chose to use
-      a colored background or to select a background image.</p>
+      edit and select <gui>Set Background Properties</gui>. You can choose to
+      use a colored background or to select a background image.</p>
       <note style="bug">
-        <p>Sometimes, <app>Brasero</app> crashes if you select a centred
-        background image, when you click the <gui>Close</gui> button.</p>
+        <p>If you select a centred background image, <app>Brasero</app>
+	sometimes crashes when you click the <gui>Close</gui> button.</p>
       </note>
       <p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to apply the changes and close the
       <gui>Background Properties</gui> dialog.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index caac26a..0b78c4c 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -16,9 +16,8 @@
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
-  <p><app>Brasero</app> is an application for burning CD-R/Ws and DVD-R/Ws,
-  designed to be easy to use, while providing all the tools necessary for
-  burning.</p>
+  <p><app>Brasero</app> is an application for burning CDs and DVDs, designed to
+  be easy to use, while providing all the tools necessary for burning.</p>
 
   <p>With <app>Brasero</app> you can:</p>
   <list>
diff --git a/help/C/prob-dvd.page b/help/C/prob-dvd.page
index 022545c..89a6c23 100644
--- a/help/C/prob-dvd.page
+++ b/help/C/prob-dvd.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#troubleshooting"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="project-video"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="tools-blank"/>
     <desc>I can't write to a DVD-R or a DVD-RW.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -31,8 +32,9 @@
       not write to a dual layer disc.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>If you are trying to use a writeable DVD, check if it has already been
-      written to before.</p>
+      <p>If you are trying to use a DVD-R, check if it has already been written
+      to before. If you are using a DVD-RW, try blanking it before you attempt
+      to write to it.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/project-audio.page b/help/C/project-audio.page
index fce403b..ecfb7ac 100644
--- a/help/C/project-audio.page
+++ b/help/C/project-audio.page
@@ -53,4 +53,10 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
+  <note>
+    <p>You can also split individual tracks into multiple tracks using the
+    <gui>Split</gui> tool and add a two second break after a track using the
+    <gui>Pause</gui> button.</p>
+  </note>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/project-data.page b/help/C/project-data.page
index 916ac7d..6c40f23 100644
--- a/help/C/project-data.page
+++ b/help/C/project-data.page
@@ -31,6 +31,13 @@
       toolbar and selecting the files. You can also add files by
       dragging and dropping them onto the project area or by clicking
       <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>Add Files</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <note style="tip">
+	<p>You can create folders on the CD to store your data in a more
+	structured manner. To create a folder, click <gui>New Folder</gui> in
+	the toolbar or select <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui><gui>New
+	Folder</gui></guiseq> from the menu bar. You can also create folders
+	inside other folders.</p>
+      </note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>You can add a title for the disc in the text entry field below the
diff --git a/help/C/project-disc-copy.page b/help/C/project-disc-copy.page
index a1f08af..56c144a 100644
--- a/help/C/project-disc-copy.page
+++ b/help/C/project-disc-copy.page
@@ -23,12 +23,12 @@
       </gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the disc which you would like to make a copy of from the drop
-      down list below <gui>Select disc to copy</gui>. If you have more than one
-      disc drive, all discs which are currently in them should be listed.</p>
+      <p>Select the disc you would like to copy from the drop down list below
+      <gui>Select disc to copy</gui>. If you have more than one disc drive, all
+      discs which are currently in them should be listed.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Chose whether you want to make a copy to another disc or create an
+      <p>Choose whether you want to make a copy to another disc or create an
       image for later use.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -38,9 +38,11 @@
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Copy</gui> to start copying the disc, or <gui>Make Several
       Copies</gui>, if you plan to make more than one copy of the disc.</p>
-      <note>If you are copying the disc and have only one disc drive, you will
-      be asked to replace the disc you are copying with a writeable one
-      after the contents are copied temporarily to your hard disk.</note>
+      <note>
+	<p>If you are copying the disc and have only one disc drive, you will
+	be asked to replace the disc you are copying with a writeable one after
+	the contents are copied temporarily to your hard disk.</p>
+      </note>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/help/C/project-save.page b/help/C/project-save.page
index 58f3903..05a9b72 100644
--- a/help/C/project-save.page
+++ b/help/C/project-save.page
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
     </license>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Image files</title>
+  <title>Save a project</title>
 
   <p>You can save an audio, a data or a video project in <app>Brasero</app> for
   editing or burning later.</p>
@@ -37,27 +37,34 @@
   </steps>
 
   <p>There are a number of ways which can be used for opening a saved
-  <app>Brasero</app> project:</p>
+  <app>Brasero</app> project by:</p>
 
-  <steps>
+  <list>
+    <item>
+      <p>selecting it from the list on the start page, under
+      <gui>Recent projects</gui></p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>clicking <guiseq><gui>Project</gui><gui>Recent Projects</gui></guiseq></p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>clicking <guiseq><gui>Project</gui><gui>Open</gui></guiseq> and
+      selecting the project</p>
+    </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Open a saved project by selecting it form the list on the start page,
-      under <gui>Recent projects</gui>, by clicking <guiseq><gui>Project</gui>
-      <gui>Recent Projects</gui></guiseq>, by clicking
-      <guiseq><gui>Project</gui><gui>Open</gui></guiseq> and selecting the
-      project or by opening the project from a file browser.</p>
-    <note>
+      <p>opening the project from a file browser</p>
+    <note style="bug">
       <p>If <app>Brasero</app> is already running, opening the project from a
       file browser will make <app>Brasero</app> vanish in a puff of logic.</p>
     </note>
     </item>
-  </steps>
+  </list>
 
   <note>
-    <p>If you open a saves project, <app>Brasero</app> will treat it as a new
-    project: if you want to save an updates version of the project, it will ask
-    you to enter a name for it, at this point you can overwrite the old version;
-    if you want to </p>
+    <p>If you open a saved project, <app>Brasero</app> will treat it as a new
+    project: if you want to save an updated version of the project, it will ask
+    you to enter a name for it, at this point you can overwrite the old version
+    or save it as a new project by entering a different file name.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/split-track.page b/help/C/split-track.page
index c26c7ea..cbe3354 100644
--- a/help/C/split-track.page
+++ b/help/C/split-track.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#tools"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="project-audio"/>
     <desc>Split an audio project track into multiple tracks</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>



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