[gnome-user-docs] More grammar corrections from bug #662039
- From: Richard Hughes <rhughes src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] More grammar corrections from bug #662039
- Date: Wed, 19 Oct 2011 09:37:54 +0000 (UTC)
commit 6971a12e285537648085a640c171db39b1000834
Author: Richard Hughes <richard hughsie com>
Date: Wed Oct 19 10:37:29 2011 +0100
More grammar corrections from bug #662039
gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page | 6 +++---
3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
index 02872c8..1e0d5be 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
</p>
<p>
To set the policy for display and printer devices, you specify the
- maximum age of the policy in days:
+ maximum age of the profile in days:
</p>
<screen>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page b/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
index 023c3c3..b1acdc9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
<p>
To create a virtual profile for a digital camera just drag and drop
- on of the image files onto the <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui>
+ one of the image files onto the <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui>
<gui>Color</gui></guiseq> dialog.
You can then <link xref="color-assignprofiles">assign profiles</link> to
it like any other device or even
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
index 56b5980..e5c664d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@
</p>
<p>
AdobeRGB is frequently used as an <em>editing space</em>.
- It can encode more colors than sRGB, and means you adjust colors in
- a photograph without worrying too much that the brightnest colors
- are being clipped or the blacks crushed.
+ It can encode more colors than sRGB, which means you can change
+ colors in a photograph without worrying too much that the most vivid
+ colors are being clipped or the blacks crushed.
</p>
<p>
PhoPhoto is the largest space available and is frequently used for
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