[gnome-user-docs] Fixed wording issues, thanks to Gabor Kelemen, #662039



commit d3da1530b7603878c47ca7164f630929434314fd
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Oct 17 19:16:38 2011 -0400

    Fixed wording issues, thanks to Gabor Kelemen, #662039

 gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page     |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page   |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-browser.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page   |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page   |   13 +++++++------
 gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page |    3 +--
 gnome-help/C/windows-key.page       |    2 +-
 10 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
index 25826c9..12a9118 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-slowkeys.page
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@
 
 <note style="tip">
 <title>Quickly turn slow keys on and off</title>
-<p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to turn Sticky
-Keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is selected, you can press and
+<p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to turn slow
+keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is selected, you can press and
 hold <key>Shift</key> for eight seconds to enable or disable slow keys.</p>
 <p>You can also turn slow keys on and off by clicking the
 <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and selecting
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page b/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
index 2004639..6b56ce5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/a11y-stickykeys.page
@@ -35,8 +35,8 @@
 
 <note style="tip">
 <title>Quickly turn sticky keys on and off</title>
-<p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to turn Sticky
-Keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is selected, you can press
+<p>Select <gui>Turn on accessibility features from the keyboard</gui> to turn sticky
+keys on and off from the keyboard. When this option is selected, you can press
 <key>Shift</key> five times in a row to enable or disable sticky keys.</p>
 <p>You can also turn sticky keys on and off by clicking the
 <link xref="a11y-icon">accessibility icon</link> on the top bar and selecting
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
index 301d1fb..d784b2f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 
 <title>Test the performance of your hard disk</title>
 
-  <p>To test the speed your hard disk:</p>
+  <p>To test the speed of your hard disk:</p>
 
 <steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
index b204402..b1c612e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-browser.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <desc>
       <link xref="net-default-browser">Change the default browser</link>,
       <link xref="net-install-flash">install Flash</link>,
-      <link xref="net-install-flash">install Moonlight</link>...
+      <link xref="net-install-moonlight">install Moonlight</link>...
     </desc>
  
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
index 27b400d..053f9f0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-email-virus.page
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Viruses are unlikely to infect your Linux computer but could infect other people you email.</desc>
+    <desc>Viruses are unlikely to infect your computer but could infect computers of people you email.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
index 5001162..da4c11d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ or rethinking how we cross-link them.</p></comment>
 <p>You can stop the screen from dimming itself:</p>
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click your name on the top bar and click <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
index d66af59..e21c1a3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sharing-desktop.page
@@ -27,14 +27,15 @@
  and open <app>Desktop Sharing</app>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To let others view or interact with your desktop, enable the
- <gui>Allow other users to view your desktop</gui> option. This means that other
- people will be able to attempt to connect to your computer.</p>
+      <p>To let others view your desktop, select
+ <gui>Allow other users to view your desktop</gui>. This means that other
+ people will be able to attempt to connect to your computer and view what's
+ on your screen.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To let others view or interact with your desktop, enable the
- <gui>Allow other users to control your desktop</gui> option. This may allow the
- other person to be able to move your mouse, run applications and browse files
+      <p>To let others interact with your desktop, select
+ <gui>Allow other users to control your desktop</gui>. This may allow the
+ other person to move your mouse, run applications, and browse files
  on your computer, depending on the security settings which you are currently
  using.</p>
     </item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
index 0e38776..1fb2d84 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
   <p>Some computers support multi-channel output for surround sound. This usually
   uses multiple TRS jacks, which are often color-coded. If you are unsure which
   plugs go in which sockets, you can test the sound output in the sound settings.
-  Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>, then click
+  Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>, then click
   <gui>Sound</gui>. On the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab, select your speakers in the list
   of devices, then click <gui>Test Speakers</gui>. In the pop-up window, click the
   button for each speaker. Each button will speak its position only to the channel
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
   <steps>
     <title>Select a default audio input device</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Open <gui>Sound</gui> and select the <gui>Output</gui> tab.</p></item>
     <item><p>Select the device in the list of devices.</p></item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
index 9834ea2..1d6c170 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
@@ -54,8 +54,7 @@
     one of the existing keys on your keyboard as a compose key.</p>
     <steps>
       <title>Define a compose key</title>
-      <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System
-      Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
       <item><p>Click <gui>Region and Language</gui>.</p></item>
       <item><p>Select the <gui>Layouts</gui> tab and click
       <gui>Options</gui>.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
index 09ca54e..6f25fad 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click your name on the top bar and click <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Keyboard</gui>.</p>



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