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[gnome-user-docs] Smallish edits to bluetooth pages, all final for 3.2

commit 13d429818a42805b14d868f20520538906553777
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Wed Oct 5 19:30:26 2011 -0400

    Smallish edits to bluetooth pages, all final for 3.2

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page     |   11 ++---
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page |   50 ++++++++++++++----------
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page  |    6 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page          |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page                    |    2 +-
 7 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index a124b6a..38d2367 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-05" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Pair Bluetooth devices.</desc>
 
@@ -41,18 +41,18 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Make the other Bluetooth device <link xref="bluetooth-visibility">discoverable or visible</link>
-      and place it within 10 meters (about 33 feet) of your computer. Then select <gui>Forward</gui>. Your
+      and place it within 10 meters (about 33 feet) of your computer. Click <gui>Continue</gui>. Your
       computer will begin searching for devices.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If there are too many devices listed, use the <gui>Device type</gui> drop-down to display only a single type of device in the list.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>PIN options...</gui> to set how a PIN will be delivered to the other device.</p>
+      <p>Click <gui>PIN options</gui> to set how a PIN will be delivered to the other device.</p>
       <note>
 	<p>The automatic PIN setting will use a six-digit numerical code. A device with no input keys or screen, such as a mouse or headset, may require a specific PIN such as 0000, or no PIN at all. Check your device's manual for the proper setting.</p>
       </note>
-      <p>Choose an appropriate PIN setting for your device, and then select <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Choose an appropriate PIN setting for your device, then click <gui>Close</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui>Continue</gui> to proceed.  If you did not choose a preset PIN, the PIN will be displayed on the screen.</p>
@@ -61,9 +61,6 @@
       <p>If required, confirm the PIN on your other device. The device should show you
       the PIN you see on your computer screen, or may prompt you to enter the PIN.
       Confirm the PIN on the device, then click <gui>Matches</gui>.</p>
-      <p>Enter the PIN code on your other device, if required. Sometimes the other device
-      will simply show you the PIN and ask you to confirm that it matches what you see on
-      your computer.</p>
       <p>You need to finish your entry within about 20 seconds on most devices, or the
       connection will not be completed. If that happens, return to the device list and
       start again.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
index 838bb82..2d8069e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-problem-connecting.page
@@ -5,6 +5,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth#problems"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="hardware-driver"/>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-05" status="final"/>
     
     <desc>The adapter could be turned off or may not have drivers, or Bluetooth might be disabled or blocked.</desc>
 
@@ -17,33 +19,39 @@
 
 <title>I can't connect my Bluetooth device</title>
 
-<p>There are a number of reasons why you may not be able to connect to a Bluetooth device (like a phone or headset):</p>
+<p>There are a number of reasons why you may not be able to connect to a Bluetooth device,
+such as a phone or headset.</p>
 
-<list>
- <item>
-  <p>Connection blocked or untrusted</p>
-  <p>Some Bluetooth devices block connections by default, or require you to change a setting to allow connections to be made. Make sure that your device is setup to allow connections.</p>
- </item>
- 
- <item>
-  <p>Bluetooth hardware not recognized</p>
-  <p>Your Bluetooth adapter/dongle may not have been recognized by the computer. This could be because drivers for the adapter aren't installed. Some Bluetooth adapters aren't supported on Linux, so you may not be able to get the right drivers for them. In this case, you will probably have to get a different Bluetooth adapter.</p>
- </item>
- 
- <item>
-  <p>Adapter not switched on</p>
-  <p>Make sure that your Bluetooth adapter is switched on. Click the Bluetooth icon on the top bar and check that it's not disabled.</p>
- </item>
- 
- <item>
-  <p>Device Bluetooth connection switched off</p>
+<terms>
+  <item>
+    <title>Connection blocked or untrusted</title>
+    <p>Some Bluetooth devices block connections by default, or require you to change
+    a setting to allow connections to be made. Make sure that your device is set
+    up to allow connections.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <title>Bluetooth hardware not recognized</title>
+    <p>Your Bluetooth adapter/dongle may not have been recognized by the computer.
+    This could be because <link xref="hardware-driver">drivers</link> for the
+    adapter aren't installed. Some Bluetooth adapters aren't supported on Linux,
+    so you may not be able to get the right drivers for them. In this case, you
+    will probably have to get a different Bluetooth adapter.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <title>Adapter not switched on</title>
+    <p>Make sure that your Bluetooth adapter is switched on. Click the Bluetooth
+    icon on the top bar and check that it's not disabled. See
+    <link xref="bluetooth-turn-on-off"/>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <title>Device Bluetooth connection switched off</title>
   <p>Check that Bluetooth is turned on on the device you're trying to connect to. For example, if you're trying to connect to a phone, make sure that it's not in airplane mode.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>No Bluetooth adapter in your computer</p>
+  <title>No Bluetooth adapter in your computer</title>
   <p>Many computers do not have Bluetooth adapters. You can buy an adapter if you want to use Bluetooth.</p>
  </item>
-</list>
+</terms>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
index 7055fea..800e06c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-remove-connection.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-22" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-05" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Remove a device from the list of Bluetooth devices.</desc>
 
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@
   <title>Remove a connection between Bluetooth devices</title>
 
 
-  <p>If you don't want to be connected to a Bluetooth device any more, you can
+  <p>If you don't want to be connected to a Bluetooth device anymore, you can
   remove the connection. This is useful if you no longer want to use a device
-  like a mouse or headset, or if you no longer with to transfer files to or
+  like a mouse or headset, or if you no longer wish to transfer files to or
   from a device.</p>
 
   <steps>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
index 951f413..3d3dc2a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-send-file.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="files-share"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-05" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Share files to Bluetooth devices such as your phone.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index 04dca42..e930ed2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth" group="#first"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-05" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
index 7088fbc..3da58b0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-visibility.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="bluetooth" group="#last"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-10-05" status="final"/>
 
     <desc>Whether or not other devices can discover your computer.</desc>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
index dcd8f19..41932fd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="guide" style="task"
+      type="guide"
       id="bluetooth">
 <info>
   <link type="guide" xref="hardware"/>
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