[gnome-user-docs] Minor edits to session-formats and session-language

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 6850b850cb9c90a0992d8c913ee8b01e3730f1db
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 27 15:11:21 2011 -0400

    Minor edits to session-formats and session-language

 gnome-help/C/session-formats.page  |   13 ++++---------
 gnome-help/C/session-language.page |   15 ++++++++-------
 2 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page b/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page
index e33e021..ecc849b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-formats.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-language"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="session-language"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-09-27" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -22,12 +22,6 @@
 
   <title>Change date and measurement formats</title>
 
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
-    <p>How do you change the system language, i.e. the language of the
-    login screen or even the boot process?</p>
-  </comment>
-
   <p>You can control the formats that are used for dates, times, numbers,
   currency, and measurement to match the local customs of your region.</p>
 
@@ -63,8 +57,9 @@
       <item><p>Change your formats, as described above.</p></item>
       <item><p>Select the <gui>System</gui> tab.</p></item>
       <item><p>Click <gui>Copy Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Administrative privileges are required. Enter your password,
-      or the password for the administrator you are prompted for.</p></item>
+      <item><p><link xref="user-admin-explain">Administrative privileges</link> are
+      required. Enter your password, or the password for the requested administrator
+      account.</p></item>
     </steps>
   </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
index 838d0f1..15ae2eb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-language.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs-language"/>
     <desc>Switch to a different language for user interface and help text.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2.1" date="2011-09-27" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -24,9 +24,9 @@
   <title>Change which language you use</title>
 
   <comment>
-    <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
-    <p>How do you change the system language, i.e. the language of the
-    login screen or even the boot process?</p>
+    <cite date="2011-09-27">shaunm</cite>
+    <p>Explain how to install support for other languages. Requires us
+    to document software installation.</p>
   </comment>
 
   <p>You can use your desktop and applications in any of dozens of languages, provided
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
   <steps>
     <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Open <gui>Region and Language</gui> and select the <gui>Language</gui> tab.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select your desired language on the <gui>Language</gui> tab.
+    <item><p>Select your desired language.
     Some translations may be incomplete, and certain applications may not
     support your language at all. Any untranslated text will appear in the
     language in which the software was originally developed, usually American
@@ -63,8 +63,9 @@
       <item><p>Change your language, as described above.</p></item>
       <item><p>Select the <gui>System</gui> tab.</p></item>
       <item><p>Click <gui>Copy Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Administrative privileges are required. Enter your password,
-      or the password for the administrator you are prompted for.</p></item>
+      <item><p><link xref="user-admin-explain">Administrative privileges</link> are
+      required. Enter your password, or the password for the requested administrator
+      account.</p></item>
     </steps>
   </section>