[gnome-user-docs] [help/C] Small grammatical changes.

[Tiffany Antopolski <antopolski src gnome org>]

commit dd06896779e2b85f914216abcb7b036a2f918360
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski gmail com>
Date:   Wed Nov 9 18:34:35 2011 -0500

    [help/C] Small grammatical changes.

 gnome-help/C/help-irc.page          |   17 +++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/help-mailing-list.page |   14 +++++++++-----
 2 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page b/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
index 9aa1541..73e8cfd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/help-irc.page
@@ -18,20 +18,21 @@
 
 <title>IRC</title>
    <p>
-      IRC stands for Internet Relay Chat, it is a real-time multi-users messaging
-      system. You can find on GNOME IRC server help and advices from other GNOME
-      users and developpers.
+      IRC stands for Internet Relay Chat. It is a real-time multi-user messaging
+      system. 
+     You can get help and advice on the GNOME IRC server from other GNOME
+      users and developers.
    </p>
    <p>
-      To connect to GNOME IRC server, you can use <app>empathy</app> or <app>xchat</app>,
-      or through using a web interface like <link href="http://chat.mibbit.com/";>mibbit</link>.
+      To connect to the GNOME IRC server using <app>empathy</app> or <app>xchat</app>,
+      or by using a web interface like <link href="http://chat.mibbit.com/";>mibbit</link>.
    </p>
    <p>
-      To create an IRC account in empathy, have to look to the 
-      <link href="ghelp:empathy#irc-manage">empathy documentation</link>.
+      To create an IRC account in empathy, see the 
+      <link href="ghelp:empathy#irc-manage">Empathy documentation</link>.
    </p>
    <p>
-      The GNOME IRC server is <sys>irc.gnome.org</sys>, you can also find it called "GIMP network".
+      The GNOME IRC server is <sys>irc.gnome.org</sys>. You may also see it referred to as the "GIMP network".
       If your computer is properly configured you can click on the link 
       <link href="irc://irc.gnome.org/gnome" /> to access the <sys>gnome</sys> channel.
    </p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/help-mailing-list.page b/gnome-help/C/help-mailing-list.page
index f6a7d25..f210b17 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/help-mailing-list.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/help-mailing-list.page
@@ -11,14 +11,18 @@
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski com</email>
+     </credit>
+     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
+     <email>baptiste millemathias gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Mailing list</title>
    <p>
-      Mailing-list are email-based discussions, You can ask for support using 
-      the GNOME mailing-lists. Almost each GNOME application has its own 
+      Mailing lists are email based discussions. You can ask for support using 
+      the GNOME mailing lists. Almost each GNOME application has its own 
       mailing list. The complete list of mailing-lists are listed 
       at <link href="http://mail.gnome.org/mailman/listinfo"; />.
    </p>
@@ -28,8 +32,8 @@
       </p>
    </note>
    <p>
-      The default language used on mailing-list is english especially for application mailing,
-      although there are users mailing-list for other languages, like <sys>gnome-de</sys> 
-      for german speakers or <sys>gnome-cl-list</sys> for all thing related to Chile.
+      The default language used on mailing lists is English.
+      There are user mailing lists for other languages. For example, <sys>gnome-de</sys> 
+      for German speakers or <sys>gnome-cl-list</sys> for all things related to Chile.
    </p>
 </page>