[nautilus-actions] [doc] couple of spelling and grammar fixes



commit cb7bdde4385b73051584f33a0ea4ad217c90f1e7
Author: Christian Kirbach <christian kirbach googlemail com>
Date:   Thu Nov 3 00:01:43 2011 +0100

    [doc] couple of spelling and grammar fixes
    
    Fix #661498.

 ChangeLog                       |   11 +++++++++--
 docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml |    6 +++---
 docs/nact/C/nact-edit.xml       |   16 ++++++++++------
 docs/nact/C/nact-execution.xml  |    8 ++++----
 docs/nact/C/nact-menus.xml      |    2 +-
 docs/nact/C/nact-profiles.xml   |    4 ++--
 6 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index ead9404..2e7699c 100644
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,9 +1,16 @@
 2011-11-02 Pierre Wieser <pwieser trychlos org>
 
+	* docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml:
+	* docs/nact/C/nact-edit.xml:
+	* docs/nact/C/nact-execution.xml:
+	* docs/nact/C/nact-menus.xml:
+	* docs/nact/C/nact-profiles.xml:
+	Apply patch provided by Christian Kirbach.
+	Fix #661498 reported by Christian Kirbach.
+
 	* docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml: Replace 'regarding' with
 	'regardless'.
-	From https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=660399, reported by
-	Gabor Karsay.
+	From #660399, reported by Gabor Karsay.
 
 2011-11-02 Pierre Wieser <pwieser trychlos org>
 
diff --git a/docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml b/docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml
index 95d6fed..5aa3762 100644
--- a/docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml
+++ b/docs/nact/C/nact-conditions.xml
@@ -856,11 +856,11 @@
           First select the type of filter:
         </para>
         <simplelist type="vert">
-          <member>does your action should always appear, regardless of
+          <member>should your action always appear, regardless of
            the desktop environment ?</member>
-          <member>does your action should only appear in some desktop
+          <member>should your action only appear in some desktop
            environment(s) ?</member>
-          <member>does your action should never appear in some
+          <member>should your action never appear in some
            desktop environment(s) ?</member>
         </simplelist>
       </listitem>
diff --git a/docs/nact/C/nact-edit.xml b/docs/nact/C/nact-edit.xml
index 00116ff..a0293b1 100644
--- a/docs/nact/C/nact-edit.xml
+++ b/docs/nact/C/nact-edit.xml
@@ -8,9 +8,12 @@
     <title>Cut/Delete</title>
     <para>
       Deletion applies to current selection.
-      When the current selection covers all profiles of an action, the
-      delete action really delete the selected profiles, leaving the action
-      as invalid if all profiles were selected.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      Be warned that selecting and deleting all profiles of an action
+      will leave this action without any profile, so in an invalid state.
+      The name of the action will be written with red (because it is
+      invalid) and italic (because it has been modified) characters.
     </para>
   </sect3>
 
@@ -19,7 +22,7 @@
     <para>
       Multiple selection is possible in &appname;.
       You can extend the current selection
-      by pressing the touch <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> or <keycap>Shift</keycap>
+      by pressing <keycap>Ctrl</keycap> or <keycap>Shift</keycap>
       while selecting an item to add to the selection.
     </para>
     <para>
@@ -30,9 +33,10 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       Note that selecting any row means also selecting children of this row.
-      These childs are said &laquosp;implicitely selected&spraquo;:
+      These children are said &laquosp;implicitely selected&spraquo;:
       they will be part of next edition operations, but are not considered
-      when verifying if selection is homogeneous. Also, they cannot be unselected.
+      when verifying if selection is homogeneous.
+      Also, they cannot be explicitely selected (nor unselected).
     </para>
   </sect3>
 </sect2>
diff --git a/docs/nact/C/nact-execution.xml b/docs/nact/C/nact-execution.xml
index 1437165..98fded5 100644
--- a/docs/nact/C/nact-execution.xml
+++ b/docs/nact/C/nact-execution.xml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
         visual selection you may
         have done in the file manager window. And, in fact, which is the
         &laquosp;<guilabel>first</guilabel>&spraquo; selected item in a
-        multiple selection is absolutly undefined and rather unpredictable.
+        multiple selection is absolutely undefined and rather unpredictable.
       </para>
     </note>
   </sect3>
@@ -288,11 +288,11 @@
     <sect4 id="usage-execution-how-singular">
       <title>Multiple executions</title>
       <para>
-        You may want your command be executed once, providing it the list of
+        You may want your command to be executed once, providing it the list of
         selected items as argument.
       </para>
       <para>
-        Or you may prefer your command be repeated for each selected item,
+        Or you may prefer your command to be repeated for each selected item,
         providing a different item as argument for each execution.
       </para>
       <para>
@@ -301,7 +301,7 @@
         arguments.
       </para>
       <para>
-        Though some parameters are not sensible to the count of the
+        Though some parameters are not depending on the count of the
         selection (<abbrev>e.g.</abbrev> &laquosp;<literal>%c</literal>&spraquo;,
         the selection count itself), most have two declensions:
       </para>
diff --git a/docs/nact/C/nact-menus.xml b/docs/nact/C/nact-menus.xml
index be2b2fb..da60c5e 100644
--- a/docs/nact/C/nact-menus.xml
+++ b/docs/nact/C/nact-menus.xml
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <sect2 id="usage-menus">
   <title>Organizing actions in menus</title>
   <para>
-    As your list of actions will grow, you most probably will want organize
+    As your list of actions will grow, you most probably will want to organize
     them into menus, submenus, and so on.
   </para>
   <para>
diff --git a/docs/nact/C/nact-profiles.xml b/docs/nact/C/nact-profiles.xml
index 7a596b9..cbef2a1 100644
--- a/docs/nact/C/nact-profiles.xml
+++ b/docs/nact/C/nact-profiles.xml
@@ -78,12 +78,12 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Cut the profile to be moved, select the profile before which
-          you want yout cut profile to be inserted, and paste it.
+          you want your cut profile to be inserted, and paste it.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Cick on the profile to be moved, and drag it to its right place.
+          Click on the profile to be moved, and drag it to its right place.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </orderedlist>



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