GNOME.org
 

[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] g-h: Minor edit, set status

commit 768c5247c2dbdcd60ec983a6f4b5243305e48af6
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Sun May 22 18:10:23 2011 -0400

    g-h: Minor edit, set status

 gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page       |    5 +++--
 gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page      |   20 +++++++++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/tips.page              |    2 +-
 9 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
index 0e92ee5..60c4fcb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -34,5 +34,6 @@
   the volume of the alert sound. This won't affect the volume of your
   music, movies, and other audio playback.</p>
 
-  <p>To disable alert sounds entirely, just select <gui>Mute</gui>.</p>
+  <p>To disable alert sounds entirely, select <gui>Mute</gui> on the
+  <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab.</p>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page
index 998730f..99cc9f2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <desc>Troubleshoot problems like having no sound or having poor sound quality.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
index 9a1ec99..c25ed7c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>Check your audio cables and sound card drivers.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
index 7a99745..641f926 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>Check that it's not muted, that cables are plugged in properly, and that the sound card is detected.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
index 81ffe38..88e73f5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-27" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
index 8a96e0c..cd29d2b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="sound-usemic"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-25" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
index c877878..3fc3613 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
@@ -4,13 +4,18 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Shaun McCance</name>
+      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+
     <desc>Set the sound volume for the computer and control the
     loudness of each application.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -18,16 +23,21 @@
 
 <title>Change the sound volume</title>
 
-<p>To change the sound volume, click the volume icon on the top bar and move the volume slider up or down. You can completely turn off sound by checking <gui>Mute</gui>.</p>
+<p>To change the sound volume, click the volume icon on the top bar and move the
+volume slider left or right. You can completely turn off sound by dragging the
+slider all the way to the right.</p>
 
-<p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally look like stylized speakers with "waves" coming out of them, and are often near the "F" keys (e.g. <key>F7</key>).</p>
+<p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally look
+like stylized speakers with waves coming out of them. They are often near the
+"F" keys at the top. On laptop keyboards, they are usually on the "F" keys.
+Hold down the <key>Fn</key> key on your keyboard to use them.</p>
 
 <p>Of course, if you have external speakers, you can also change the volume using the volume control on the speakers themselves. Some headphones have a volume control too.</p>
 
 <section id="apps">
  <title>Changing the sound volume for individual applications</title>
- <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for others unchanged. This is useful if you're listening to music and browsing the web, for example - you might want to turn off the volume in the web browser so sounds from websites don't interrupt the music.</p>
- <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, click the volume icon on the top bar and click <gui>Sound Preferences</gui>. Go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume of the application there.</p>
+ <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for others unchanged. This is useful if you're listening to music and browsing the web, for example. You might want to turn off the volume in the web browser so sounds from websites don't interrupt the music.</p>
+ <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, click the volume icon on the top bar and select <gui>Sound Preferences</gui>. Go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume of the application there.</p>
  <p>Only applications that are playing sounds will be listed. If an application is playing sounds but isn't listed, it might not support the feature that lets you control its volume in this way. In that case, you can't change its volume.</p>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
index 5697520..d345df9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/tips-specialchars.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="keyboard-layouts"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/tips.page b/gnome-help/C/tips.page
index 1c68653..af0aa09 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/tips.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/tips.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="tips"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
[Date Prev][Date Next]   [Thread Prev][Thread Next]   [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]