[pinpoint] introduction: improve "presentation thus far"

[Øyvind Kolås <ok src gnome org>]

commit 3d00d2b83f05a3b877adf7bc43aac4da73bfaf8c
Author: Jussi Kukkonen <jku linux intel com>
Date:   Fri May 20 14:23:41 2011 +0300

    introduction: improve "presentation thus far"
    
    * Make the printed code and processed code actually the same.
    * Make lines shorter so they look better in the presentation, also
      only introduce one new thing per line.
    * Demonstrate comments

 introduction.pin |   13 +++++++------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/introduction.pin b/introduction.pin
index c4e303b..a11c49e 100755
--- a/introduction.pin
+++ b/introduction.pin
@@ -5,11 +5,12 @@
 - The bits above this point are defaults for every slide in the presentation
 Welcome to pinpoint
 
-- [bowls.jpg] lines starting with - are slide seperators. This is where you can override the defaults with with per-slide properties
+- lines starting with - are slide separators.
 A tool for making excellent presentations
 
--
+- [bowls.jpg] You can override the defaults with with per-slide properties
 It has a simple text source
+# The source can include witty comment lines
 
 - [font=monospace 18px] [shading-opacity=1.0]
 The current presentation thus far:
@@ -20,16 +21,16 @@ The current presentation thus far:
  - The bits above this point are defaults for every slide in the presentation
  Welcome to pinpoint
 
- - [bowls.jpg] lines starting with - are slide seperators..
+ - lines starting with - are slide separators.
  A tool for making excellent presentations
 
- -
- 
+ - [bowls.jpg] You can override the defaults with with per-slide properties
  It has a simple text source
+ # The source can include witty comment lines
 
  - [font=monospace 18px] [shading-opacity=1.0]
-
  The current presentation thus far:
+
 - [text-align=center]
 You start by writing down the core concepts that you will be talking about. Then sort and format
 them as a pinpoint presentation in a text editor of your choice.