[release-notes/gnome-3-0] 3.0 tweaks.

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 2330516ff39f91c1933265e04d1e6684b8165e91
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Thu Mar 31 17:00:19 2011 +0530

    3.0 tweaks.

 help/C/release-notes.xml |   24 ++++++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/release-notes.xml b/help/C/release-notes.xml
index 1d811bf..3d86b06 100644
--- a/help/C/release-notes.xml
+++ b/help/C/release-notes.xml
@@ -54,11 +54,11 @@
 		<title>Introduction</title>
 
       <para>			
-        GNOME &gnomeversion; is a major milestone in the history of the GNOME Project. The 
+        GNOME &gnomeversion; is a significant milestone in the history of the GNOME Project. The 
         release introduces an exciting new desktop which has been designed for 
         today's users and which is suited to a range of modern computing 
         devices. GNOME's developer technologies have seen substantial 
-        improvements for 3.0 also. Modernized and streamlined, they will enable 
+        improvements for 3.0. Modernized and streamlined, they will enable 
         developers to provide better user experiences with less time and 
         effort. And GNOME 3.0 comes with the same GNOME applications that users 
         know and trust, many of which have received significant enhancements.
@@ -127,20 +127,28 @@
 				 was done by the GNOME Furry Creatures from Alpha Centauri Translation
 				 Team. On behalf of the community, ... -->
 		<para>
-      These notes were compiled by Allan Day with help from the community. 
-      This release itself could not have been possible without the hard work and 
+      This release could not have been possible without the hard work and 
       dedication of the GNOME community. Congratulations and thanks everyone 
       who made it a reality.
     </para>
 
-		<para>
-			These release notes may be freely translated into any language. If you wish to
-			translate it into your language, please contact the
+    <para>
+      GNOME release notes can be freely translated into any language. If you 
+      wish to translate them into your language, please contact the
 			<ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/TranslationProject";>GNOME Translation
-			Project</ulink>.  The GNOME release notes are released under a <ulink
+			Project</ulink>.
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
+      These notes are released under a <ulink
 			url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/";>Creative
 			Commons Sharealike 3.0 license</ulink>. Copyright © The GNOME Project
 		</para>
+
+    <para>
+      Compiled by Allan Day with help from the GNOME community.
+    </para>
+
 	</sect1>
 	
 </article>