[gnome-user-docs] g-h/net-wireless-disconnecting: minor copy edits, marked final

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit bde04a60ca1852777f773d5c083db50607ae53eb
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Mar 28 11:50:27 2011 -0400

    g-h/net-wireless-disconnecting: minor copy edits, marked final

 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page |   11 +++++------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
index 23f32ec..faf03ed 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
@@ -4,12 +4,11 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net#wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net#problems"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
-      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     
     <credit type="author">
@@ -27,7 +26,7 @@
 <section id="signal">
  <title>Weak wireless signal</title>
 
- <p>A common reason for being disconnected from wireless network is that you have low signal. Wireless networks have a limited range, so if you are too far away from the wireless base station you may not be able to get a strong enough signal to maintain a connection. Walls and other objects between you and the base station can also weaken the signal.</p>
+ <p>A common reason for being disconnected from a wireless network is that you have low signal. Wireless networks have a limited range, so if you are too far away from the wireless base station you may not be able to get a strong enough signal to maintain a connection. Walls and other objects between you and the base station can also weaken the signal.</p>
  
  <p>The network icon on the top bar displays how strong your wireless signal is. If the signal looks low, try moving closer to the wireless base station.</p>
  
@@ -36,16 +35,16 @@
 <section id="network">
  <title>Network connection not being established properly</title>
 
- <p>Sometimes, when you connect to a wireless network, it may appear that you have successfully connected at first, but then you will be disconnected. This normally happens because your computer was only partially successful in connecting to the network - it managed to establish a connection, but was unable to finalize the connection for some reason and so was disconnected.</p>
+ <p>Sometimes, when you connect to a wireless network, it may appear that you have successfully connected at first, but then you will be disconnected. This normally happens because your computer was only partially successful in connecting to the networkâ??it managed to establish a connection, but was unable to finalize the connection for some reason and so was disconnected.</p>
  
- <p>A possible reason for this was that you entered the wrong wireless passphrase, or that your computer was not allowed on the network (because the network requires a username to log-in, for example).</p>
+ <p>A possible reason for this is that you entered the wrong wireless passphrase, or that your computer was not allowed on the network (because the network requires a username to log in, for example).</p>
  
 </section>
 
 <section id="hardware">
  <title>Unreliable wireless hardware/drivers</title>
  
- <p>Some wireless network hardware can be a little unreliable. Wireless networks are complicated, so wireless cards and base stations/routers occassionally run into minor problems and may drop connections. This is annoying, but it happens quite regularly with many devices. If you are disconnected from wireless connections from time to time, this may be the only reason. If it happens very regularly, you may want to consider using different hardware.</p>
+ <p>Some wireless network hardware can be a little unreliable. Wireless networks are complicated, so wireless cards and base stations occassionally run into minor problems and may drop connections. This is annoying, but it happens quite regularly with many devices. If you are disconnected from wireless connections from time to time, this may be the only reason. If it happens very regularly, you may want to consider using different hardware.</p>
  
 </section>