[gnome-user-docs] net-what-is-ip-addy - completed for review

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 2c90731b2d682030f0a885d3728e2138dc8e2f22
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 21 11:55:31 2011 -0400

    net-what-is-ip-addy - completed for review

 gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page |   15 +++++----------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index 273b4a6..42e7f53 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-what-is-ip-address">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-21" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -11,23 +11,18 @@
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>XXXXX</desc>
+    <desc>An IP Address is like a home address for your computer.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>What is an IP address?</title>
 
   <comment>
     <cite date="2011-03-20" href="mailto:jwcampbell gmail com">Jim Campbell</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
   </comment>
 
-  <p>Short introductory text...</p>
+  <p>IP address stands for <em>Internet Protocol address</em>, and each device that is connected to a network (such as the Internet) has one.</p>
 
-  <steps>
-    <item><p>First step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
-  </steps>
+  <p>An IP address is similar to your home address. Your home address is a unique set of numbers, words and characters identifies where you live, and helps mail to be sent to your home. An IP address is the unique set of numbers that identifies your computer so that it can send and receive data. Much like you need an address before you can receive mail, an IP address needs to be assigned to your computer before it can talk to other computers on the network.</p>
 
+  <p>An IP address can either be <em>dynamic</em> or <em>static</em>. Dynamic IP addresses are temporarily assigned each time your computer accesses the network. Static IP addresses are fixed, and do not change. Dynamic IP addresses are more common that static addresses. Static IP addresses are typically only used when there is a special need for them, such as administering a server.</p>
 </page>