[gnome-user-docs] Small tidy-up of shell-exit



commit f8581b95c2dbada6cc5dc15863effc54b0bcef02
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 20 17:41:20 2011 -0400

    Small tidy-up of shell-exit

 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page |   21 ++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index 754f3f5..1d3cb8f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -20,11 +20,8 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Logging out, shutting down, switching user</title>
-<note>
- <p>
-  From the login screen, you can click on the bottom right hand corner to bring up the shut down option menu.  Select <gui>Suspend</gui>, <gui>Restart</gui> or <gui>Shut Down</gui>.
- </p>
-</note>
+
+<p>When you've finished using your computer, you can turn it off, send it to sleep (to save power), or leave it switched on and just log out.</p>
 
 <section id = "logout">
 <title>Log out or switch user</title>
@@ -36,7 +33,7 @@
  </item>
   <item>
   <p>
-    You can now select <gui>Logout</gui>or<gui>Switch User</gui> by clicking on the option of choice.
+    You can now select <gui>Logout</gui> or <gui>Switch User</gui> by clicking on the option of choice.
   </p>
   <terms>
    <item>
@@ -52,7 +49,7 @@
     Switch Between Users
     </title>
     <p>
-    Suspends your session, allowing another user to log in and use the computer.
+    Locks your screen, allowing another user to log in and use the computer.
     </p>
     </item>
   </terms>
@@ -92,21 +89,15 @@
  <p>
  To unlock the screen just move the mouse or press a key. You will need to enter your password to login.
 </p>
-<note>
+
 <p>
 If more than one user has an account on the computer and the screen is locked, others can choose to <gui>Switch User</gui> to login to their account. They will be unable to access your work, and you will be able to switch back to your locked session when they finish using the computer.
  </p>
- </note>
 </section>
 
 <section id = "shut-down">
 <title>Shutting down, restarting, and sending the computer to sleep</title>
 
-<note>
- <p>
- You can not <gui>Shut Down</gui> the computer if multiple users are logged in.  Attempting to do so will only log you out.  Only one user can be logged in when attempting to <gui>Shut Down</gui> the computer.
- </p>
- </note>
 <p>To shutdown your computer:</p>
 <steps>
  <item>
@@ -152,6 +143,6 @@ If more than one user has an account on the computer and the screen is locked, o
   </item>
  </steps>
 
-
+<p>You can not <gui>Shut Down</gui> the computer if multiple users are logged in.  Attempting to do so will only log you out.  Only one user can be logged in when attempting to <gui>Shut Down</gui> the computer.</p>
 </section>
 </page>



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