[gnome-user-docs] minor updates to two bluetooth pages



commit 5bfc86c3ec83548c2f6074687dbd2ff5a572da1e
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 20 16:57:18 2011 -0400

    minor updates to two bluetooth pages

 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page |   12 ++++++++++++
 gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page    |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
index 6da06d2..9d76d04 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-connect-device.page
@@ -18,4 +18,16 @@
 
 <title>Connect your computer to another Bluetooth device</title>
 
+  <p>Before you can transfer files between Bluetooth-enabled devices, you first need to connect them. This is also called, "pairing" Bluetooth devices.</p>
+
+  <p>Turn on computer's Bluetooth and make discoverable</p>
+  <p>Turn on device's Bluetooth and make discoverable</p>
+  <p>Click Bluetooth icon in top-bar, and select set up a new device</p>
+  <p>Click forward</p>
+  <p>Wait for device to be discovered</p>
+  <p>Select device from list and click forward</p>
+  <p>Enter the PIN provided by the Bluetooth New Device Setup tool</p>
+  
+  <!--I'm not as familiar with the different PIN-related options. Are you familiar with those? -->
+  
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
index dc4ab88..c233aa1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/bluetooth-turn-on-off.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware#bluetooth"/>
-    <desc>Enable or disable the bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
+    <desc>Enable or disable the Bluetooth device on your computer.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-20" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     </license>
   </info>
 
-<title>Turn bluetooth on or off</title>
+<title>Turn Bluetooth on or off</title>
 
 <p>
 You can turn <app>Bluetooth</app> on to send and receive files, but turn it off to conserve power.



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