[gnome-user-docs] Review standards for misc. pages, fix validation errors in power- topics
- From: Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Review standards for misc. pages, fix validation errors in power- topics
- Date: Sun, 20 Mar 2011 00:44:04 +0000 (UTC)
commit 9065b4ea2c967899038a3b7859b4a8d344d69961
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date: Sat Mar 19 20:43:52 2011 -0400
Review standards for misc. pages, fix validation errors in power- topics
gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page | 12 +++++++++---
gnome-help/C/clock-set.page | 9 +++++----
gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page | 7 ++++---
gnome-help/C/fallback-mode.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/get-involved.page | 9 +++++----
gnome-help/C/media.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/net.page | 5 +++--
gnome-help/C/open-file-manager.page | 9 +++++----
gnome-help/C/passwords.page | 9 +++------
gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/prefs.page | 2 +-
.../C/{function-scanning.page => scanning.page} | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page | 12 +++++++-----
gnome-help/C/web.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/windows-key.page | 2 +-
16 files changed, 49 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index f46c6d1..d09b0e5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -1,10 +1,14 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic" style="task"
+ type="topic"
+ style="task"
id="clock-calendar">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#clock"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="draft"/>
+
+ <desc>Display your appointments on the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
+
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -13,12 +17,14 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Display your appointments next to the Calendar</title>
+ <title>View appointments in your calendar</title>
<p>You can organize your appointments by using <app>Evolution</app>.</p>
<p> If you have an account, you just need to click on <gui>Calendar</gui>, in the left bottom menu and just start adding them. As you do that, they will appear in the right side when you click on the <gui>Clock</gui> sited in the center of the top bar.</p>
<p>One faster way to get to the <app>Evolution</app> Calendar is clicking on the <gui>Clock</gui> and selecting <gui>Open Calendar</gui>.</p>
+
<note><p>Notice that this will only work if you have added a mail account to <app>Evolution</app>. Otherwise, it will appear a window with some steps to follow that will let you add your first account.</p></note>
+
<comment>
<cite date="2011-02-10" href="mailto:nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl">Natalia Ruz</cite>
<p>Should have some information or link to "how to add a mail account to Evolution", and possibly an image (but maybe a screenshot is too big).</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index bc4071c..d3fc762 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic" style="task"
+ type="topic"
+ style="task"
id="clock-set">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#clock"/>
- <desc>Set the time and date.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-10-31" status="draft"/>
+ <desc>Update the time/date displayed at the top of the screen.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -14,7 +15,7 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Change the time</title>
+<title>Change the time and date</title>
<p> To adjust the Time and Date just click on the Clock, sited in the Panel and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p>
<p>Once you are there, click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and introduce your password so you will be able to:</p>
<list>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index 4398970..388f882 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic" style="task"
+ type="topic"
+ style="task"
id="clock-timezone">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#clock"/>
- <desc>Add and change your different timezones.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-10-31" status="draft"/>
+ <desc>Add timezones so you can see what time it is in other cities.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/fallback-mode.page b/gnome-help/C/fallback-mode.page
index 73e4b2f..6462a78 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/fallback-mode.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/fallback-mode.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#apps"/>
<desc>If your computer's graphics card doesn't support certain features, a more basic version of the desktop will be started.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
index fedd44d..b30cd56 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/get-involved.page
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="topic" style="task"
+ type="topic"
+ style="task"
id="get-involved">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
- <desc>How and where to report problems.</desc>
+ <desc>How and where to report problems with these help files.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-1-10" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski com</email>
@@ -16,7 +17,7 @@
</license>
</info>
-<title>File a Bug Against <app>Gnome Help</app></title>
+<title>Noticed a problem with the help?</title>
<p>
To file a bug against <app>Gnome Help</app>, click on the link <link href = "https://bugzilla.gnome.org/"/>.
</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/media.page b/gnome-help/C/media.page
index 56ce184..e4c892a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/media.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/media.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
type="guide"
id="media">
<info>
- <revision version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net.page b/gnome-help/C/net.page
index 5520d61..0a2a768 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net.page
@@ -1,8 +1,9 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="guide"
id="net">
+
<info>
- <revision version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
@@ -24,7 +25,7 @@
<title>Internet & networking</title>
<section id="problems">
- <title>Troubleshooting Internet connection problems</title>
+ <title>Troubleshooting internet connection problems</title>
</section>
<section id="wireless">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/open-file-manager.page b/gnome-help/C/open-file-manager.page
index 27ee050..8d9c071 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/open-file-manager.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/open-file-manager.page
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- type="guide" id="open-file-manager">
+ type="guide"
+ id="open-file-manager">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="files#search"/>
<link type="seealso" xref="files-copy"/>
- <desc></desc>
+ <desc>Manage and organize files with the file manager.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-02-25" status="candidate"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -17,7 +18,7 @@
</info>
-<title>Open file manager</title>
+<title>Browse files and folders</title>
<p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/passwords.page b/gnome-help/C/passwords.page
index 311ab8e..0590a90 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/passwords.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/passwords.page
@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#manage-accounts"/>
- <desc>Set or reset passwords.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-24" status="review"/>
+ <desc>Set or reset your passwords and advice on choosing a password.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -14,9 +14,6 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Passwords</title>
-
+<title>Passwords</title>
-
-
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page
index 2e2428f..d15bf2d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
- type="task"
+ style="task"
id="power-batterycapacity">
<info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
index 357e113..6f9d9eb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
- type="tips"
+ style="tip"
id="power-batterylife">
<info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/prefs.page b/gnome-help/C/prefs.page
index eb65875..ed585a5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/prefs.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/prefs.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
type="guide"
id="prefs">
<info>
- <revision version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/function-scanning.page b/gnome-help/C/scanning.page
similarity index 90%
rename from gnome-help/C/function-scanning.page
rename to gnome-help/C/scanning.page
index 62e1ab1..2e6ba3a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/function-scanning.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/scanning.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#function"/>
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-28" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page b/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
index 3483522..8eac000 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
@@ -6,8 +6,8 @@
<link type="guide" xref="index#apps"/>
- <desc>Take a picture or record your screen.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-04" status="candidate"/>
+ <desc>Take a picture or record a video of what's happening on your screen.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antpoolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -16,9 +16,10 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
-<title>Screenshot and Screencast</title>
+<title>Screenshots and screencasts</title>
-<section id="screenshot"><title>Screenshot</title>
+<section id="screenshot">
+ <title>Screenshot</title>
<steps>
<item><p>
Enter the <gui>Activities</gui> overview by pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F1</key></keyseq> or by touching the cursor to the <link xref="shell-terminology">hot corner</link>, or by pressing the <link xref="shell-terminology">windows</link> key.
@@ -69,7 +70,8 @@ Click <gui>Save</gui>.
</steps>
</section>
-<section id= "screencast"><title>Screencast</title>
+
+<section id="screencast"><title>Screencast</title>
<p>
This feature allows you to make a recording of what is happening on your computer monitor.
</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/web.page b/gnome-help/C/web.page
index c32439d..10081b8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/web.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/web.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
type="guide"
id="web">
<info>
- <revision version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="stub"/>
+ <revision version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
index ca68d26..1ba508b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/windows-key.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
<info>
<desc>The windows key opens the activities overview. You can usually find it next to the Alt key on your keyboard.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
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