[gnome-user-docs] Review power- pages for standards
- From: Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Review power- pages for standards
- Date: Sun, 20 Mar 2011 00:08:33 +0000 (UTC)
commit 8277f0eec349fde2c4882223f51d366062d79b2c
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date: Sat Mar 19 20:07:49 2011 -0400
Review power- pages for standards
gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page | 8 +++-----
gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page | 7 ++-----
gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page | 3 ++-
gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page | 3 ++-
gnome-help/C/power-batteryoptimal.page | 8 +++++---
gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page | 4 +++-
gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page | 3 ++-
gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page | 5 ++---
gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page | 5 +++--
gnome-help/C/power-history.page.old | 28 ----------------------------
gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page | 4 ++--
gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page | 8 +-------
gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page | 10 ++++++----
gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/power-spindown.page | 7 +++----
gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page | 3 ++-
gnome-help/C/power-turnoffbutton.page | 3 +--
gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page | 8 ++++----
gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/power.page | 9 ++++++---
21 files changed, 52 insertions(+), 80 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
index 301486f..1238371 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
+ style="problem"
id="power-batterybroken">
<info>
@@ -8,15 +9,12 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="power-batteryoptimal"/>
<desc>Your battery is probably not broken; it's more likely that it's just old.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
</credit>
- <credit type="author">
- <name>Phil Bull</name>
- <email>philbull gmail com</email>
- </credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page
index 2c61f40..2e2428f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterycapacity.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
+ type="task"
id="power-batterycapacity">
<info>
@@ -7,15 +8,11 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="power-batteryoptimal"/>
<desc>Batteries get less efficient at storing charge as they get older, so you might want to check how efficient your battery is.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="outdated"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
</credit>
- <credit type="author">
- <name>Phil Bull</name>
- <email>philbull gmail com</email>
- </credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
index bb70a98..6a70ac7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
<link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
<desc>The battery life that is displayed is only an estimate.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="draft"/>
+
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
index a403e87..357e113 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
+ type="tips"
id="power-batterylife">
<info>
@@ -8,7 +9,7 @@
<desc>Tips to reduce your computer's power consumption.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="outdated"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryoptimal.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryoptimal.page
index d06406b..afba40e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryoptimal.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryoptimal.page
@@ -1,12 +1,14 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
+ style="tip"
id="power-batteryoptimal">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
+
<desc>Don't let the battery run down too far.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="review"/>
+
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,7 +21,7 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
-<title>Get the Most Out of Your Laptop Battery</title>
+<title>Get the most out of your laptop battery</title>
<p>As laptop batteries age, they get worse at storing charge and their capacity gradually decreases. There are a few techniques that you can use to prolong their useful lifetime, although you shouldn't expect a big difference.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
index ff68efc..13717a4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
@@ -5,7 +5,9 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
<desc>Some laptops intentionally slow down when they are running on battery.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
index d3227f4..fb46444 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
<desc>Tweaks from the manufacturer and differing battery life estimates may be the cause of this problem.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page b/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
index e25f02b..5b21bda 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
+ style="task"
id="power-brighter">
<info>
@@ -7,7 +8,7 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="power-whydim"/>
<desc>Laptops and desktop monitors usually have buttons that you can press to change the brightness.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
index b23d216..5d939e0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
id="power-closelid">
@@ -8,8 +7,8 @@
<link type="guide" xref="hardware#power"/>
<link type="seealso" xref="power-suspendfail"/>
- <desc>Laptops go to sleep when you close the lid in order to save power.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="incomplete"/>
+ <desc>Laptops go to sleep when you close the lid, in order to save power.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page b/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
index 8abca1b..f0c17b1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
id="power-constantfan">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
+
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="stub"/>
+
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page b/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
index b069c2e..50a00d5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
+ style="problem"
id="power-hotcomputer">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page b/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
index 9b7e5f7..be101e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-lowpower.page
@@ -1,12 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
id="power-lowpower">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
<desc>Allowing the battery to completely discharge is bad for it.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -23,9 +22,4 @@
<p>Some computers have problems hibernating, and may not be able to recover the applications and documents you had open when you turn on the computer again. In this case, it is possible that you could lose some of your work if you didn't save it before the computer hibernated. You may be able to <link xref="power-suspendfail">fix problems with hibernation</link> though.</p>
- <comment>
- <cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
- <p>Explain that the computer shuts down when it gets to low battery. Check that 10% is the default threshold (it might be lower). Explain how to change the threshold setting, and the power-down behaviour (i.e. shut down or hibernate).</p>
- </comment>
-
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page b/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page
index 0f98255..01cb35b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-nowireless.page
@@ -1,12 +1,14 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
+ style="problem"
id="power-nowireless">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
+ <link type="seealso" xref="power-suspendfail"/>
+
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -15,8 +17,8 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>I have no wireless network when I wake up my computer</title>
-
+<title>I have no wireless network when I wake up my computer</title>
+
<comment>
<cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
<p>Explain that some hardware misbehaves and doesn't reset itself properly when the computer wakes up from being suspended/hibernated. Mention that you can try turning the wireless card off and then on again if it has a hard/soft switch.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
index 0f10976..76d7bdb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
<desc>Your computer will work, but you might need a different power cable or a travel adapter.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-12-31" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-spindown.page b/gnome-help/C/power-spindown.page
index e873f8f..891aa41 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-spindown.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-spindown.page
@@ -1,12 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
id="power-spindown">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
<desc>XXX</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="stub"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="outdated"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -15,8 +14,8 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>What does "Spin down hard disks when possible" mean?</title>
-
+<title>What does "Spin down hard disks when possible" mean?</title>
+
<comment>
<cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
<p>Explain what this means, and why it might help to save power (but reduce performance). It's a setting in the Power Preferences.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
index 2cab58d..1bfeaa7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
type="topic"
+ style="problem"
id="power-suspendfail">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
<link type="guide" xref="hardware#power"/>
- <desc>Some computer hardware causes problems with suspend/hibernate</desc>
+ <desc>Some computer hardware causes problems with suspend/hibernate.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
<credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-turnoffbutton.page b/gnome-help/C/power-turnoffbutton.page
index 412fa2b..29e2bb0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-turnoffbutton.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-turnoffbutton.page
@@ -1,12 +1,11 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
id="power-turnoffbutton">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#preferences"/>
<desc>Look in <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui><gui>Power</gui></guiseq> for the option to change this.</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
index 7f0e61f..148b6c8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-whydim.page
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
+ style="task"
id="power-whydim">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
- <desc></desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="review"/>
+ <desc>When your laptop is running on battery, the screen will dim when the computer is idle in order to save power.</desc>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
</info>
- <title>Dim the Monitor When Idle</title>
+ <title>Why does my screen go dim after a while?</title>
<p>
When your laptop computer is running on battery, the screen will dim when the computer is idle in order to save power.
</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page b/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
index 42dd1f3..2f1dbe3 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
- xmlns:e="http://projectmallard.org/experimental/";
type="topic"
+ style="problem"
id="power-willnotturnon">
<info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power.page b/gnome-help/C/power.page
index ac14c0e..0c8bf9c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power.page
@@ -3,6 +3,9 @@
id="power">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="hardware#power" />
+
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
+
<credit type="author">
<name>Natalia Ruz</name>
<email>nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl</email>
@@ -14,14 +17,14 @@
</info>
-<title>Power Settings</title>
+<title>Power settings</title>
<section id="battery" style="2column">
- <title>Battery Settings</title>
+ <title>Battery settings</title>
</section>
<section id="problems" style="2column">
- <title>Problems and Frequently Asked Questions</title>
+ <title>Problems</title>
</section>
</page>
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