[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] revised backup-restore.page for clarity and style. marked page as final.



commit 01236fb332b35b1f716d24c859e5b0a7b5ec86a7
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jun 14 12:32:15 2011 -0500

    revised backup-restore.page for clarity and style. marked page as final.

 gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page |   18 ++++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
index c62689f..22305e9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
@@ -1,11 +1,12 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic" id="backup-restore">
+      type="topic" style="task"
+      id="backup-restore">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Retrieve your files from a backup.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-30" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-14" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -20,13 +21,18 @@
 
 <title>Restore a backup</title>
 
-<p>If you lost files and you have a backup of them, you can restore them from the backup: </p>
+<p>If you lost or deleted some of you files, but you have a backup of them, 
+you can restore them from the backup: </p>
 
 <list>
-  <item><p>If you want to restore your backup from a device such as external hard drive, USB drive or another computer on the network, you can <link xref="files-copy">copy them</link> back to your computer.</p></item>
+  <item><p>If you want to restore your backup from a device such as external 
+hard drive, USB drive or another computer on the network, you can <link 
+xref="files-copy">copy them</link> back to your computer.</p></item>
 
-  <item><p>If you want to restore your backup from a backup application such as <app>Déjà Dup</app>, you must to be sure that you used one of them (<app>Déjà Dup</app> or some other backup application) to perform your backup before. See more information in <app>Déjà Dup</app>.
-</p></item>
+  <item><p>If you created your backup using a backup application such 
+as <app>Déjà Dup</app>, it is recommended that you use the same application
+to restore your backup. Review the application help for your backup program,
+it will provide specific instructions on how to restore your files.</p></item>
 </list>
 
 </page>



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