[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] modified sound-usemic.page for style. marked page as final.

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 280caa8052fe6b3becb5f625e0ea3db5a4b5fe4e
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Mon Jun 13 15:56:25 2011 -0500

    modified sound-usemic.page for style. marked page as final.

 gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page |   27 ++++++++++++++-------------
 1 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
index 88e73f5..5b52d78 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-27" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-13" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -17,17 +17,18 @@
 
   <title>Use a different microphone</title>
 
-  <p>You can use an external microphone for audio conferencing, making
-  voice recordings, or using other multimedia applications. Even if your
-  computer has a built-in microphone or a webcam with a microphone, a
-  separate microphone could provide better audio quality.</p>
+  <p>You can use an external microphone for chatting with friends, speaking
+  with colleagues at work, making voice recordings, or using other multimedia 
+  applications. Even if your computer has a built-in microphone or a webcam 
+  with a microphone, a separate microphone usually provides better audio 
+  quality.</p>
 
-  <p>If your microphone has a circular TS (<em>tip, sleeve</em>) plug, plug
-  it into the appropriate socket on your computer. Most computers have two
-  sockets: one for microphones and one for speakers. Look for a picture of
-  a microphone next to the socket.
-  Microphones plugged into a TS socket will usually be used by default.
-  If not, see the instructions below for selecting a default input device.</p>
+  <p>If your microphone has a circular plug, just plug it into the appropriate 
+  adapter on your computer. Most computers have two adapters: one for 
+  microphones and one for speakers. Look for a picture of a microphone next to 
+  the adapter. Microphones plugged into the appropriate adapter will usually 
+  be used by default. If not, see the instructions below for selecting a 
+  default input device.</p>
 
   <p>If you have a USB microphone, plug it into any USB port on your
   computer. USB microphones act as separate audio devices, and you may
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@
 
   <steps>
     <title>Select a default audio input device</title>
-    <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>Sound</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>On the <gui>Input</gui> tab, select the device in the list of devices.
     The input level indicator should respond when you speak.</p></item>
@@ -43,5 +44,5 @@
 
   <p>If you don't see your device on the <gui>Input</gui> tab, check the
   <gui>Hardware</gui> tab. Make sure the profile for the device includes
-  "input".</p>
+  "input."</p>
 </page>