[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] Review a number of more conceptual topics

[Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>]

commit 794c00c9794876ef1ac5ae1b7c3fcde865dfcd95
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Thu Jun 9 05:12:54 2011 +0100

    Review a number of more conceptual topics

 gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page |    8 ++++----
 gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page   |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/printing-paperjam.page    |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page     |    4 ++--
 4 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page b/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page
index 737057b..f87f6e7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/music-player-newipod.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="media#music" />
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-09" status="final"/>
  
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
 
 <title>My new iPod won't work</title>
 
-<p>If you have a new iPod that has never been connected to a computer before, it won't be recognized properly when you connect it to a Linux computer. This is because iPods need to be set-up and updated using the <app>iTunes</app> software, which only runs on Windows and Mac OS.</p>
+<p>If you have a new iPod that has never been connected to a computer before, it won't be recognized properly when you connect it to a Linux computer. This is because iPods need to be set up and updated using the <app>iTunes</app> software, which only runs on Windows and Mac OS.</p>
 
-<p>To set-up your iPod, install iTunes on a Windows or Mac computer and plug it in. You will be led through a few steps to set it up. When asked for the <gui>Volume Format</gui>, choose <gui>MS-DOS (FAT)</gui>, <gui>Windows</gui> or similar. The other format does not work as well with Linux.</p>
+<p>To set up your iPod, install iTunes on a Windows or Mac computer and plug it in. You will be led through a few steps to set it up. If asked for the <gui>Volume Format</gui>, choose <gui>MS-DOS (FAT)</gui>, <gui>Windows</gui> or similar. The other format (HFS/Mac) does not work as well with Linux.</p>
 
-<p>Once you have finished set-up, the iPod should work normally when you plug it into a Linux computer.</p>
+<p>Once you have finished setup, the iPod should work normally when you plug it into a Linux computer.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
index e28b3d3..91efc53 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>Your computer will work, but you might need a different power cable or a travel adapter.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-09" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
 <p>Different countries use power supplies at different voltages (usually 110V or 220-240V) and AC frequencies (usually 50 Hz or 60 Hz). Your computer should work with a different country's power supply as long as you have an appropriate power adapter. You may also need to flip a switch.</p>
 
-<p>If you have a laptop, all you should need to do is get the right plug for your power adapter. Many laptops are delivered with more than one plug for their adapter, so you may already have the right one. If not, plugging your existing one into a standard travel adapter will suffice.</p>
+<p>If you have a laptop, all you should need to do is get the right plug for your power adapter. Many laptops come packaged with more than one plug for their adapter, so you may already have the right one. If not, plugging your existing one into a standard travel adapter will suffice.</p>
 
 <p>If you have a desktop computer, you can also get a cable with a different plug, or use a travel adapter. In this case, however, you may need to change the voltage switch on the computer's power supply, if there is one. Many computers don't have a switch like this, and will happily work with either voltage. Look at the back of the computer and find the socket that the power cable plugs into. Somewhere nearby, there may be a small switch marked "110V" or "230V" (for example). Switch it if you need to.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-paperjam.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-paperjam.page
index 01fc321..acd5f00 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-paperjam.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-paperjam.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>How you clear a paper jam will depend on the make and model of printer that you have.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-09" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
@@ -22,6 +22,6 @@
 
 <p>The manual for your printer will usually provide detailed instructions on how to clear paper jams. Usually, you will need to open one of the printer's panels to find the jam inside and then firmly (but carefully!) pull the jammed paper out of the printer's feeding mechanism.</p>
 
-<p>Once the jam has been cleared you may need to press the <gui>Resume</gui> button to start printing again. With some printers, you may even need to turn the printer off and then on again, and then start the print job again.</p>
+<p>Once the jam has been cleared you may need to press the printer's <gui>Resume</gui> button to start printing again. With some printers, you may even need to turn the printer off and then on again, and then start the print job again.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page b/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page
index a2008a5..28bd650 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/printing-streaks.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>If print-outs are streaky, fading, or missing colors, check your ink levels or clean the print head.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-09" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
  
  <item>
   <p>Streaks and lines</p>
-  <p>If you have an inkjet printer, the print head may be dirty or partially-blocked. Try cleaning the print head (see the printer's instruction manual).</p>
+  <p>If you have an inkjet printer, the print head may be dirty or partially blocked. Try cleaning the print head (see the printer's manual for instructions).</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>