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[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] edits and status updates to power-* modified: gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page modified:

commit 8d3ec842329551a4f59722c694d8b057cc3474ec
Author: Kelly Sinnott <ksinnott5ht gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jun 8 13:14:09 2011 -0700

    edits and status updates to power-*
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
    	modified:   gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page

 gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page   |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page     |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page        |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page     |    2 +-
 8 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
index ce8fda8..849ff00 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterybroken.page
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-batteryoptimal"/>
     
-    <desc>Your battery is probably not broken; it's more likely that it's just old.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
+    <desc>Your battery is probably not broken; it's more likely that it is too old to hold charge.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-05-08" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-30" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
  <p><em>Battery may be broken. Your battery has a very low capacity which means that it may be old or broken.</em></p>
 </quote>
 
-<p>This message is displayed when the computer detects that your battery is not capable of storing much charge. The most likely reason for this is that your battery is old; it's probably not broken, so there's no need to worry.</p>
+<p>This message is displayed when the computer detects that your battery is not capable of storing much charge. The most likely reason for this is that your battery is old. If this is the case, there will be no damage to your computer or hardware.</p>
 
 <p>Over time, all laptop batteries lose their ability to store charge. After a while (normally a year or more), the battery will only be able to store a fraction of the charge that it could when it was new. The message above is shown when this happens.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
index e158738..02dea9d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryestimate.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <desc>The battery life that is displayed is only an estimate.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-08" status="incorrect"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
index 6cb9387..1f8f149 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterylife.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <desc>Tips to reduce your computer's power consumption.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-30" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
 <title>Use less power and improve battery life</title>
 
-<p>Computers can use a lot of power. By using some simple energy-saving strategies, you can reduce your energy bill and help the environment. If you have a laptop, this will also help to increase the amount of time it can run on battery for.</p>
+<p>Computers can use a lot of power. By using some simple energy-saving strategies, you can reduce your energy bill and help the environment. If you have a laptop, this will also help to increase the amount of time that it can run on battery power.</p>
 
 <section id="general">
  
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
index 9deaef0..b849d37 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batteryslow.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <desc>Some laptops intentionally slow down when they are running on battery.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page b/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
index b233069..df365b4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-batterywindows.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="power#battery"/>
     <desc>Tweaks from the manufacturer and differing battery life estimates may be the cause of this problem.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page b/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
index 18c5184..42e9504 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-brighter.page
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     
     <desc>Laptops and desktop monitors usually have buttons that you can press to change the brightness.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -21,12 +21,12 @@
 
 <title>How can I make the screen brighter?</title>
 
-<p>If you have a laptop or netbook, there are probably some screen brightness controls on the keyboard. They usually have stylized "sun" icons, and are often on or above the function keys (e.g. <key>F4</key>). On some laptops, you must hold-down the Function (<key>Fn</key>) key and then press one of the brightness keys to change the screen brightness. For example, you might press <keyseq><key>Fn</key><key>F4</key></keyseq> to decrease the brightness and <keyseq><key>Fn</key><key>F5</key></keyseq> to increase it.</p>
+<p>If you have a laptop or netbook, there are probably some screen brightness controls on the keyboard. They usually have stylized "sun" icons, and are often on or above the function keys (e.g. <key>F4</key>). On some laptops, you must hold down the Function (<key>Fn</key>) key and then press one of the brightness keys to change the screen brightness. For example, you might press <keyseq><key>Fn</key><key>F4</key></keyseq> to decrease the brightness and <keyseq><key>Fn</key><key>F5</key></keyseq> to increase it.</p>
 
 <p>You can also change the brightness by clicking your name on the top panel, selecting <gui>System Settings</gui> and then opening the <gui>Screen</gui> preferences.</p>
 
 <p>If you have a desktop computer, you should be able to use controls on the monitor to change the brightness of the screen. How you do this depends very much on what monitor you have - some have specific buttons to change brightness, whereas others have buttons which you use to navigate on-screen menus.</p>
 
-<p>If you have increased the brightness to the maximum but it's still not bright enough, you may need to adjust the <em>contrast</em> or <em>gamma</em> settings of the screen instead. Not all screens allow you to change both of these settings, however.</p>
+<p>If you have increased the brightness to the maximum but it's still not bright enough, you may need to adjust the <em>contrast</em> or <em>gamma</em> settings of the screen instead. These controls will also be found on the monitor or in one of its menus, although not all monitors have them.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
index 9a5b5da..5e23627 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     
     <desc>Laptops go to sleep when you close the lid, in order to save power.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-30" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page b/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
index 8ad1c1c..566c698 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>Some fan-control software could be missing, or your laptop may be running hot.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-30" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
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