[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] Review backup topic and mark as final

[Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>]

commit 7eacfe9ea34ee36eb7977b52fc0b1d437a9906b6
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jun 8 19:17:02 2011 +0100

    Review backup topic and mark as final

 gnome-help/C/backup-check.page |   10 +++++-----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
index 16b28e7..7bdcb34 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-check.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files#backup"/>
     <desc>Verify your backup was successful.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2010-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -17,7 +17,8 @@
   <title>Check your backup</title>
 
   <p>After you have backed up your files, you should make sure that the 
-backup was successful.</p>
+backup was successful. If it didn't work properly, you could lose important 
+data since some files could be missing from the backup.</p>
 
    <p>When you use the file manager to copy or move files, the 
 computer checks to make sure that all of the data transferred correctly.  
@@ -26,12 +27,11 @@ you may want to perform additional checks to confirm that your
 data has been transferred properly.</p>
 
   <p>You can do an extra check by looking through the copied files 
-and directories in the destination media. By checking for the files and folders
-that you transferred, you can have extra confidence that the process was
+and folders on the destination media. By checking to make sure that the files and folders you transferred are actually there in the backup, you can have extra confidence that the process was
 successful.</p>
     
   <note style="tip"><p>If you find that you do regular backups of large amounts of data, you may find it easier to 
 use a dedicated backup program, such as <app>Déjà Dup</app>. Such a program is more powerful and more reliable than 
-just copying and pasting data.</p></note>
+just copying and pasting files.</p></note>
 
 </page>