[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] A couple of tag changes, grammar and spelling.

[Tiffany Antopolski <antopolski src gnome org>]

commit ec78a8cc6d8e6582e3be4e7992656fe3d33998ad
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 20:04:49 2011 -0500

    A couple of tag changes, grammar and spelling.
    
    Updated status to final.

 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page |   14 +++++++-------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index 8441adb..c2a4073 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-19" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,12 +19,12 @@
 
 <title>Activities, dash, top bar... What are they?</title>
 
-<!-- THIS SHOULD BE ALPHABETICALLY SORTED -->
+<!-- THIS SHOULD BE ALPHABETICALLY SORTED... it is. -->
 
 <terms>
  <item>
   <title>Activities overview</title>
-  <p>The <em>activities overview</em> is the screen that's displayed when you click the <gui>Activities</gui> button at the top left of the screen.</p>
+  <p>The <em>activities overview</em> is the screen that's displayed when you click on <gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
@@ -39,22 +39,22 @@
  
  <item>
   <title>Hot corner</title>
-  <p>The <em>hot corner</em> is the corner at the top left of the screen. When you move the pointer there, the activities overview opens.</p>
+  <p>The <em>hot corner</em> is the corner at the top left of the screen. When you move the pointer to this corner, the activities overview opens.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Notifications</title>
-  <p><em>Notifications</em> are messages that pop up at the bottom of the screen, telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting with you sends a message, a message will pop up to tell you. If you don't want to deal with a message right now, it is hidden in your Messaging Tray. Move your mouse to the bottom-right corner to see your Messaging Tray.</p>
+  <p><em>Notifications</em> are messages that pop up at the bottom of the screen, telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting with you sends a message, a message will pop up to tell you. If you don't want to deal with a message right now, it is hidden in your <em>messaging tray</em>. Move your mouse to the bottom-right corner to see your messaging tray.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>System settings</title>
-  <p>The <em>System Settings</em> are where you can change preferences and so on, similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac OS. Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui> to access them.</p>
+  <p>The <em>system settings</em> are where you can change preferences and so on, similar to the Control Panel in Windows or the System Preferences in Mac OS. Click your name on the top-right of the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui> to access them.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <title>Top bar</title>
-  <p>The <em>top bar</em> is the bar that runs along the very top of the screen. The <gui>Activities</gui> button is on one end of the top bar and your user name is on the other.</p>
+  <p>The <em>top bar</em> is the bar that runs along the very top of the screen. The <gui>Activities</gui> link is on one end of the top bar and your username is on the other.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>