[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] changed style, added note, and deleted link to stub page.



commit 12f70cf4aa7e22f7493cdfa1b25ac96245ada918
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 20:35:12 2011 -0400

    changed style, added note, and deleted link to stub page.

 gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page |   19 +++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index f28885a..89c36d9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <desc>Display your appointments on the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="reviewed"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -20,23 +20,26 @@
 
   <title>View appointments in your calendar</title>
   
-<p>You can see your calendar appointments by clicking on the clock on the top bar if the mail and calendar application called <app>Evolution</app> is installed in your computer. Here are the steps to view appointments in your calendar:</p>
-
+<note>
+<p>This requires <app>Evolution</app> to be installed in your computer.</p> 
+<p>Most distros have come with <app>Evolution</app> installed by default.  If yours does not, you may need to install it using your distros package manager.</p>
+</note>
+<p>To view your appointments:</p>
   <steps> 
-    <item><p>If you have already set up Evolution, click the clock in the middle of the top bar.</p>
+    <item><p>Click on the clock on the top bar.</p>
 </item>
-    <item><p>Click the date you want to see your appointments on the <gui>Calendar.</gui></p></item>
-    <item><p><gui>Calendar</gui> will display existing appointments on the right. As appointments are added in Evolution, they will appear in the clock's appointment list.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the date for which you want to see your appointments on the <gui>Calendar</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p> The calendar will display existing appointments on the right. As appointments are added in <app>Evolution</app>, they will appear in the clock's appointment list.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
-<p>To quickly get to the full Evolution calendar, click on the clock and click <gui>Open Calendar</gui>.</p>
+<p>To quickly get to the full <app>Evolution</app> calendar, click on the clock and click <gui>Open Calendar</gui>.</p>
 
 <media type="image" src="figures/shell-appts.png"
        width="500" height="282">
   <p>Clock, calendar, and appointments</p>
 </media>
 
-<note><p>This will work only if you have an existing <app>Evolution</app> account. Otherwise, a <link xref="app-evolution-setup">window</link> will appear with the necessary steps for adding your first account.</p></note>
+<note><p>This will work only if you have an existing <app>Evolution</app> account. Otherwise, a window will appear with the necessary steps for adding your first account.</p></note>
 
 <comment>
     <cite date="2011-02-10" href="mailto:nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl">Natalia Ruz</cite>



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