[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] minor style changes to sound-alert.page. marked page as final.



commit b7d9077df539b4909c58a2ef180d251d165ec3af
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 19:59:25 2011 -0400

    minor style changes to sound-alert.page. marked page as final.

 gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
index 60c4fcb..d99d586 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-05-22" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
@@ -24,15 +24,15 @@
   alert sounds entirely.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>Sound</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>On the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab, select an alert sound. Each sound
-    will play when you click on it so you can hear what it sounds like.</p></item>
+    will play when you click on it so you can hear how it sounds.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>Use the volume slider on the <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab to set
   the volume of the alert sound. This won't affect the volume of your
-  music, movies, and other audio playback.</p>
+  music, movies, or other sound files.</p>
 
   <p>To disable alert sounds entirely, select <gui>Mute</gui> on the
   <gui>Sound Effects</gui> tab.</p>



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