[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] user-add: checked for correctness, finalised, and clarified.



commit a6348108a7a9a6b38cd4b0f80b2c5752cfc3570d
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 11:36:27 2011 -0400

    user-add: checked for correctness, finalised, and clarified.
    
    clarified 'clickable' label button.

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page |   14 ++++++++------
 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index c86fd5a..6497f48 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-addguest"/>
     <desc>Add new users so that other people can log in to the computer.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -41,14 +41,15 @@
   <item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
   to add a new user account.</p></item>
   <item><p>If you want the new user to have administrative access to the computer,
-  select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type. Administrators can do things
+  select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type in the dropdown menu. Administrators can do things
   like add and delete users, install software and drivers, and change the date and
   time.</p></item>
   <item><p>Enter the new user's full name. The username will be filled in automatically
   based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you can change it if you
-  like. Click <gui>Create</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
+  like.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click <gui>Create</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
   <item><p>The account is initially disabled until you choose what to do about
-  the user's password. Under <gui>Login Options</gui> click the button label next
+  the user's password. Under <gui>Login Options</gui> click the label <gui>Account disabled</gui> next
   to <gui>Password</gui>. Use the <gui>Action</gui> drop-down list to set the
   password now, allow the user to log in without a password, or have the user
   set their password the first time they log in.</p>
@@ -59,11 +60,12 @@
   <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password. These
   passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so
   be careful.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p></item>
 </steps>
 	
-<p>If you like, you can click the image next to the user's name on
+<note><p>Back in the <gui>User Accounts</gui> dialog box you can click the image next to the user's name on
 the right to set an image for the account. This image will be shown in
 the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use, or you
-can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
+can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p></note>
 
 </page>



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