[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] g-h/web-*: technical reviews

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 1c7e9d43583ae8aedc6ab3e4dfee2bb90a0106a9
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 10:28:23 2011 -0400

    g-h/web-*: technical reviews

 gnome-help/C/web-default-browser.page   |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/web-default-email.page     |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/web-email-virus.page       |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/web-install-flash.page     |    9 +++++++--
 gnome-help/C/web-install-moonlight.page |    7 ++++++-
 5 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/web-default-browser.page b/gnome-help/C/web-default-browser.page
index e8677af..a128af7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/web-default-browser.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/web-default-browser.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="web#browser"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="correct"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click your name on the top bar and click <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/web-default-email.page b/gnome-help/C/web-default-email.page
index 6f155bd..dcca66e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/web-default-email.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/web-default-email.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="web#email"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="correct"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Click your name on the top bar and click <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/web-email-virus.page b/gnome-help/C/web-email-virus.page
index 9df29a7..d5850de 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/web-email-virus.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/web-email-virus.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-antivirus"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="correct"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/web-install-flash.page b/gnome-help/C/web-install-flash.page
index f5b1805..447e7ac 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/web-install-flash.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/web-install-flash.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="web#browser"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="correct"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -20,6 +20,11 @@
 
 <p><app>Flash</app> is a <em>plug-in</em> for your web browser which allows you to watch videos and use interactive web pages on some websites. Some websites won't work without Flash.</p>
 
+<comment>
+<cite>shaunm</cite>
+<p>Would be nice to (soft?) link to a page on the software installer</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>If you do not have Flash installed, you will probably see a message telling you so when you visit a website that needs it. Flash is available as a free (but not open-source) download for most web browsers. Most Linux distributions have a version of Flash that you can install through their software installer (package manager) too.</p>
 
 <steps>
@@ -52,7 +57,7 @@
  <title>Open-source alternatives to Flash</title>
  <p>A handful of free, open-source alternatives to Flash are available. These tend to work better than the Flash plug-in in some ways (for example, by handling sound playback better), but worse in others (for example, by not being able to display some of the more complicated Flash pages on the web).</p>
  <p>You might like to try one of these out if you are dissatisfied with the Flash player, or would like to use as much open-source software as possible on your computer. Here are a few of the options:</p>
- <list>
+ <list style="compact">
   <item><p>Gnash</p></item>
   <item><p>LightSpark</p></item>
   <item><p>SWFdec (no longer being updated)</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/web-install-moonlight.page b/gnome-help/C/web-install-moonlight.page
index 48924f6..622cccd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/web-install-moonlight.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/web-install-moonlight.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="web#browser"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="correct"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -18,6 +18,11 @@
 
 <title>Install the Silverlight plug-in</title>
 
+<comment>
+<cite>shaunm</cite>
+<p>Would be nice to (soft?) link to a page on the software installer</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p><app>Silverlight</app> is a <em>plug-in</em> for your web browser which allows you to watch videos and use interactive web pages on some websites. Some websites won't work without Silverlight.</p>
 
 <p>If you view a Silverlight-enabled website but don't have the plug-in installed, you will probably see a message telling you so. This message should have instructions telling you how to get the plug-in, but these instructions might not be suitable for your web browser or version of Linux.</p>