[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] g-h/net-*: tech reviews

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 380a135d06e95da4d90b8cf8421e8337bfdcbcff
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jun 6 12:41:56 2011 -0400

    g-h/net-*: tech reviews

 gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page          |   11 ++++++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page      |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page       |    5 +++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page          |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page        |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page        |    2 +-
 7 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
index 960f602c..9d60eb8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wired-connect.page
@@ -5,20 +5,25 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#wired"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>To set-up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a network cable.</desc>
+    <desc>To set up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a network cable.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Connect to a wired (Ethernet) network</title>
 
-<p>To set-up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a network cable. The network icon on the top panel should rotate for a few seconds and then will change to a "socket" icon when you are connected.</p>
+<comment>
+<cite>shaunm</cite>
+<p>top bar. rotate?</p>
+</comment>
+
+<p>To set up most wired network connections, all you need to do is plug in a network cable. The network icon on the top panel should rotate for a few seconds and then will change to a "socket" icon when you are connected.</p>
 
 <p>If this does not happen, you should first of all make sure that your network cable is plugged in. One end of the cable should be plugged into the rectangular Ethernet (network) port on your computer, the other end should be plugged into a switch, router, wall socket or similar (depending on the network setup you have).</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
index 0e7b54c..a5a496e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#wireless"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="incorrect"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
index 927dc5c..1163149 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-hidden"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@
 <title>Connect to a wireless network</title>
 
 <comment>
- <p>Quick procedure for connecting to a wireless network. Link to other pages explaining problems/things that could go wrong at each step. Remember the net-wireless-hidden topic should be linked in</p>
+<cite>shaunm</cite>
+<p>says to see see-also links, but those aren't useful</p>
 </comment>
 
 <p>Here is how to connect to a wireless network:</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
index 58d7e30..fcec0ae 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net#problems"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-28" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="correct"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
index f9f5a8a..7627544 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-hidden"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page
index e6d9234..cccfa1d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#wireless"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="incorrect"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
index 22aa136..02fd045 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="net#wireless"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-05" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-06" status="correct"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>