[gnome-user-docs] [g-h]backup pages ready for review



commit 05cd8667e2e6115cc757d1ad31f062084674387f
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski com>
Date:   Sat Feb 26 05:13:02 2011 -0500

    [g-h]backup pages ready for review

 gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page  |    6 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/backup-how.page        |    8 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page    |    9 ++++-----
 gnome-help/C/backup-testing.page    |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page |    8 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/backup-what.page       |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/backup-where.page      |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/backup-why.page        |    4 +++-
 gnome-help/C/backup.page            |    2 +-
 9 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
index c1c50f6..6544f20 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-frequency.page
@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#backup"/>
     <desc>How often should backups be done?</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -19,7 +21,7 @@
 <p>
 
 
-For example, if you are running a network environment with critical data stored on your servers, then even nightly backups may not be enough. 
+For example, if you are running a network environment with critical data stored on your servers, then even nightly backups may not be enough.
 </p>
 <p>
 On the other hand, if you are backing up the data on your home computer then you may need to factor in a few things, such as:
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
index 1fb653e..4dac7f0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-how.page
@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup"/>
     <title type="sort">d</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -24,7 +26,7 @@ If you have the room, it is best to backup the entire home directory with the fo
 
 <list>
  <item><p>Files that you have copied from a CD, DVD, or other removable media, since it would be faster to copy them again than to restore them from backup.</p></item>
- <item><p>Files that you can generate easily. For example, PDF's that can be generated from TeX files, or object files that can be made with make.  Just make sure the source is backed up.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Files that you can generate easily. For example, PDF's that can be generated from TeX files, or object files that can be made with the Make utility.  Just ensure the source is backed up.</p></item>
  <item><p>Your trashed files, which can be found in <cmd>~/.local/share/Trash</cmd></p></item>
 </list>
 
@@ -36,7 +38,7 @@ The amount of data you can backup is limited by the size of the storage device.
    </p>
    <note style="tip">
    <p> <media type="image" src = "deja-dup.png"/>
-   Alternatively, you can use an app that can back your files up for you.  </p><p>  One such app is <app>Déjà Dup</app>.  It is very simply and intuitive to use, and it hides the complexity of doing backups regularly, off-site and encrypted. 
+   Alternatively, you can use an app that can back your files up for you.  </p><p>  One such app is <app>Déjà Dup</app>.  It is very simply and intuitive to use, and it hides the complexity of doing backups regularly, off-site and encrypted.
 </p>
 <p>
  The <app>Déjà Dup</app> help will walk you through setting your preferences for the backup, as well as how to restore your data from the backup.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
index e18adca..478f675 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-restore.page
@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#backup"/>
     <desc>Get your files back.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -16,10 +18,7 @@
    <p>
 If you simply copied your files to a safe location, such as an external hard drive, another computer on the network or a  USB drive, you can <link xref="files-copy">copy them</link> back to your computer.
   </p>
-  <p> 
+  <p>
 If you used <app>Déjà Dup</app> to perform your backup, you should use <app>Déjà Dup</app> to restore your data from backup.  See <app>Déjà Dup</app> help.
   </p>
-
-
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-testing.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-testing.page
index c68aa1b..71d7b10 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-testing.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-testing.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#backup"/>
     <desc>Make sure your backup was successful.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-02-26" status="stub"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
index e0e9614..b861737 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-thinkabout.page
@@ -4,8 +4,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#backup"/>
     <desc>Important considerations when backing up data.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
@@ -22,7 +24,7 @@ Deciding what files to backup and finding where they all are is the most difficu
 <terms>
 <item>
    <title>Your Personal Files and Settings</title>
-<p>These are usually stored in your home folder (<cmd>/home/your_name</cmd>). They could be in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music, Videos and/or .evolution. If your backup medium has sufficient space, consider backing up the entire <cmd>/home</cmd> folder. This is the simplest way.</p>
+<p>These are usually stored in your Home folder (<cmd>/home/your_name</cmd>). They could be in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music, Videos and/or .evolution. If your backup medium has sufficient space, consider backing up the entire <cmd>/home</cmd> folder. This is the simplest way.</p>
 
 <p>
       If you are not able to backup all of <cmd>/home</cmd>, see below for a list of some subfolders of the <cmd>/home</cmd> directory to check for important files.
@@ -31,7 +33,7 @@ Deciding what files to backup and finding where they all are is the most difficu
 <list>
 <item><p><cmd>~/</cmd> represents your home directory <cmd>/home/your_name</cmd> </p></item>
 
- <item><p>any file or folder name that starts with a period is by default hidden. To view these  select <gui>View</gui> from the main menu, then select <gui>Show Hidden Files</gui> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.
+ <item><p>Any file or folder name that starts with a period is by default hidden. To view hidden files select <gui>View</gui> from the main menu, then select <gui>Show Hidden Files</gui> or press <keyseq><key> Ctrl </key><key> H </key></keyseq>.
 </p></item>
 </list>
 </note>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
index ef3dafe..bba074b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-what.page
@@ -4,10 +4,12 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup"/>
     <title type="sort">b</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-02-25" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
index c82cab5..50cb23e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-where.page
@@ -4,10 +4,12 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup"/>
     <title type="sort">c</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-25" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
index fac7643..c5519c8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup-why.page
@@ -5,10 +5,12 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="backup"/>
     <title type="sort">a</title>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/backup.page b/gnome-help/C/backup.page
index 9f9bde1..dae33b0 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/backup.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/backup.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#backup" />
     <desc>Why, what, where and how of backups.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="0.1" version="0.1" date="2010-06-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-26" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>



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