[gnome3-web] index: remove added text and fold 2 concepts in to preexisting text



commit 82f1cb47c4d1d2d605aa585f96f9c57d8a219a8d
Author: Jason D. Clinton <me jasonclinton com>
Date:   Fri Jan 28 17:06:43 2011 -0600

    index: remove added text and fold 2 concepts in to preexisting text

 index.html |   22 ++--------------------
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index b4e3f24..bb0a92e 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
 
   <h2>Simply beautiful</h2>
 
-  <p>GNOME's new desktop takes elegance to a new level. We've swept away the clutter and made a simple and easy-to-use desktop, and we've made this the most beautiful GNOME desktop ever, with a new visual theme, a refined new font and carefully crafted animations.</p>
+  <p>GNOME's new desktop takes elegance to a new level. We've swept away the clutter and made a simple and easy-to-use desktop, and we've made this the most beautiful GNOME desktop ever, with a new visual theme, a refined new font and carefully crafted animations--all while preserving compatibilty.</p>
 
   <h2>An overview at a glance</h2>
 
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
     <h2>Distraction-free computing</h2>
 
-    <p>GNOME 3 is designed to reduce distraction and interruption and to put you in control. Our new notifications system subtly presents messages and will save them until you are ready for them, and the GNOME 3 panel has been styled so that it is part of the background, not the foreground.</p>
+    <p>GNOME 3 is designed to reduce distraction and interruption and to put you in control. Our new notifications system subtly presents messages and will save them until you are ready for them, and the GNOME 3 panel has been styled so that it is part of the background, not the foreground. These changes allow you to focus on your creative tasks.</p>
   </div> <!-- grid_10 -->
 
   <div class="grid_6"><a href="img/search-big.png" rel="fancybox"><img class="screenshot" src="img/search.png"/></a></div>
@@ -67,24 +67,6 @@
 
   </div> <!-- grid_10 -->
 
-  <div class="grid_10">
-    <h2>Create more</h2>
-
-    <p>Features like window tiling and distraction-free user interface elements allow you to focus on your creative tasks so that you can spend more time creating. The GNOME 3 interface uses symbolic icons which blend in to the background rather than draw your attention.</p>
-
-    <h2>Vibrant GTK+ ecosystem</h2>
-
-    <p>Hundreds of GTK+ applications exist and even though GNOME 3 looks toward the future with a elegant update to GTK+, GTK+ 3, GNOME 3 works with all Linux applications&mdash;new and old. GNOME supports and encourages the vibrant GNOME ecosystem and the diverse ways that people use their computers.</p>
-
-  </div> <!-- grid_10 -->
-  
-  <div class="grid_10">
-    <h2>Power users</h2>
-
-    <p>All of the great GNOME tools that you're used to are still here. We, the developers, are GNOME users too and we think that you're going to love the way that the new user interface helps make the great tools that you're used to even better.</p>
-
-  </div> <!-- grid_10 -->
-
   <div class="grid_16 muchmore">
     <h2>And much, much more</h2>
 



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