[baobab/mallard-documentation] I edited the ftp description and added some information fo the options.

[Julita Inca <jinca src gnome org>]

commit f53fe2aaba9463b1ae8ceebfa18b67af6f8ccb4f
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date:   Wed Dec 21 22:57:21 2011 -0500

    I edited the ftp description and added some information fo the options.

 help/C/ftp.page         |   23 +++++++++++++++--------
 help/C/scan-remote.page |    6 +++---
 help/C/ssh.page         |    6 ++----
 help/C/web-dav.page     |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/ftp.page b/help/C/ftp.page
index b687bf5..faaea12 100644
--- a/help/C/ftp.page
+++ b/help/C/ftp.page
@@ -16,17 +16,24 @@
   <title>File Transfer Protocol</title>
 
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-17" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
-  <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p></comment>
+    <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p>
+  </comment>
+  
+  <p>You can access a remote server by using FTP Protocol:</p>
 
   <steps>
-        <item><p>Click <gui>FTP (with login)</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
-	<item><p>Write the name your server to establish the connection on  <gui>Server</gui>.</p></item>
-        <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui></p>
-            <p>The <gui>Port</gui> of this protocol is 21.</p>
-	    <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> is the folder you want to scan, consider <gui>/</gui> to write the specific route</p>
-            <p>The <gui>User Name</gui>is the name of the home of the server.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>FTP (with login)</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Write the name or address server to establish the connection.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui></p>
+      <p>The <gui>Port</gui> to connect to on the server is 21.</p>
+      <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> you want to scan has to be written considering the initial route <gui>/</gui>.</p>
+      <p>The <gui>User Name</gui>is the name of the account used to connect to the server.</p></item>
   </steps>
-
+  
+  <note style="important">
+    <p>If you select <gui>Public FTP</gui> as a Service type the user name information is not neccesary because the user is usually anonymous.</p>
+  </note>
+ 
   <p>You can read more about this protocol <link xref="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc959.txt";>here</link></p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/scan-remote.page b/help/C/scan-remote.page
index 84183f9..0c07ce1 100644
--- a/help/C/scan-remote.page
+++ b/help/C/scan-remote.page
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@
 	<item><p><link xref="ssh">SSH</link> is an acronym for Secure Shell.  
         It is a protocol for secure remote login and other secure network services over an insecure network.</p></item>
 
-	<item><p><link xref="ftp">FTP (with login)</link>: it is an acronym for File Transfer Protocol. 
-	It is used to promote sharing of files (computer programs and/or data), to encourage indirect or implicit (via programs) 
-	use of remote computers, to shield a user from variations in file storage systems among hosts, and to transfer data reliably and 		efficiently. FTP, though usable directly by a user at a terminal, is designed mainly for use by programs.</p></item>
+	<item><p><link xref="ftp">FTP (with login)</link> is an acronym for File Transfer Protocol. 
+	It is used to sharing and transfering folders reliably and efficiently. You can scan from remote computers 
+        shielding a user account.</p></item>
 
 	<item><p><link xref="ftp">Public FTP</link>: File Transfer Protocol for sharing files where it is not necessary to 
 	login with a user name and password, the server creates an anonymus user to do the connection.</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/ssh.page b/help/C/ssh.page
index 72b5aa0..b4f9fa3 100644
--- a/help/C/ssh.page
+++ b/help/C/ssh.page
@@ -18,9 +18,7 @@
   <comment><cite date="2011-12-19" href="mailto:yrazes gmail com">Julita Inca</cite>
   <p>This assumes the reader knows there are many forms to establish connection remotely to scan folders.</p></comment>
 
-  <p>Maybe you are an admin of an Intranet file server and one day you are greeted with an urgent notice that nobody in the company 
-  can save any folder on it. The alert when you logged in is that the disks are completely full. In this case you can start solving 
-  your problem by plugging in your SSH credentials and configure the scanning by doing:</p>    
+  <p>Use your SSH credentials and configure the scanning process by doing:</p>    
 
   <steps>
 	<item><p>Click <gui>SSH</gui> as a Service type.</p></item>
@@ -28,7 +26,7 @@
         <item><p>Add some <gui>Optional information</gui></p>
               <p>The <gui>Port</gui> of this protocol is 22.</p>
               <p>The <gui>Folder</gui> is the folder you want to scan, consider <gui>/</gui> to write the specific route</p>
-              <p>The <gui>User Name</gui>is the name of the home of the server.</p></item>
+              <p>The <gui>User Name</gui> is the name of the home of the server.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>You can read more about this <link xref="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc4251.txt";>protocol</link> and 
diff --git a/help/C/web-dav.page b/help/C/web-dav.page
index 9429362..b940187 100644
--- a/help/C/web-dav.page
+++ b/help/C/web-dav.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   <p><gui>Folder:</gui></p>
   <p><gui>User Name:</gui></p>
 
-  <note="tip">
+  <note style="tip">
     <p>You can see more details of the WebDAV Protocol <link xref="http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc5397.txt";>here</link>.</p>
   </note>