[gnome3-web] Add a bit more detail to the parties page.

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit b1006aa7c6ff1fb5762fcfb5412c9f858698f611
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Apr 25 11:20:18 2011 +0100

    Add a bit more detail to the parties page.

 parties.html |    8 +++-----
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/parties.html b/parties.html
index 2fab06a..17f6875 100644
--- a/parties.html
+++ b/parties.html
@@ -222,12 +222,11 @@ function init() {
 <br />
   </div><!-- grid_12 -->
 <div class="grid_4">
-   <h2>The release</h2>
-   <p style="text-align: justify;">GNOME is supported by a worldwide community. To celebrate the release of GNOME 3.0, nearly one hundred and fifty release parties were organized around the globe.</p>
+   <h2>Launch parties</h2>
+   <p style="text-align: justify;">GNOME is used and supported by people across the world. To celebrate the release of GNOME 3.0, over one hundred release parties were organized in almost 50 countries.</p>
+   <p style="text-align: justify;">Use the map to see where GNOME 3.0 release parties happened and to find links to each one.</p>
   </div><!-- grid_4 -->
 
-</div><!-- grid_16 -->
-
 <div class="container_16">
   <div class="grid_16 footer">
   Copyright © 2011 <a href="http://www.gnome.org";>The GNOME Project</a><br/>
@@ -239,4 +238,3 @@ function init() {
 
 </body>
 </html>
-