[gnome-user-docs] user-*: Some 3.0.2 reviews
- From: Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] user-*: Some 3.0.2 reviews
- Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2011 17:00:52 +0000 (UTC)
commit 1d4882a6ba2177050bc3a2a7c1151294c03b2e84
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date: Fri Apr 15 11:26:04 2011 -0400
user-*: Some 3.0.2 reviews
gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page | 13 ++++++++++---
gnome-help/C/user-add.page | 15 +++++++++++----
gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page | 6 +++---
gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page | 30 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------
gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/user-delete.page | 6 +++---
gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page | 2 +-
gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page | 7 +------
8 files changed, 53 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
index d494fcb..439d075 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="prefs"/>
+ <title type="link" role="trail">Users</title>
<desc>
<link xref="user-add">Add user</link> or
<link xref="user-addguest">guest user</link>,
@@ -11,7 +12,7 @@
<link xref="user-admin-change">administrators</link>...
</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-25" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="final"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -25,14 +26,20 @@
<p>Each person that uses the computer should have a different user account. This allows them to keep their files separate from yours and to choose their own settings. It's also more secure. You can only access a different user account if you know the password.</p>
<section id="manage" style="2column">
- <title>Manage user accounts</title>
+ <info>
+ <title type="link" role="trail">Accounts</title>
+ </info>
+ <title>Manage user accounts</title>
</section>
<section id="passwords" style="2column">
- <title>Passwords</title>
+ <title>Passwords</title>
</section>
<section id="privileges" style="2column">
+ <info>
+ <title type="link" role="trail">Privileges</title>
+ </info>
<title>User privileges</title>
</section>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 5aacf7e..c86fd5a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="user-addguest"/>
<desc>Add new users so that other people can log in to the computer.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="incomplete"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -22,14 +22,20 @@
<title>Add a new user account</title>
+<comment>
+ <cite date="2011-04-15">shaunm</cite>
+ <p>We need a note in here about password hints. Share content
+ with user-changepassword</p>
+</comment>
+
<p>You can add multiple user accounts to your computer. Give one account
to each person in your household or company. Every user has their own
home folder, documents, and settings.</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>Click <gui>User Accounts</gui>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the bottom left corner and type your
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the bottom-left corner and type your
password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to add user
accounts.</p></item>
<item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
@@ -48,7 +54,8 @@
set their password the first time they log in.</p>
<p>If you choose <gui>Set a password now</gui>, have the user type their password
in the <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields. See
- <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>. You can also click the button next to the
+ <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>.</p>
+ <p>You can also click the button next to the
<gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password. These
passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so
be careful.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
index b8a1b1c..7ac464d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
<desc>Allow guests to use your computer temporarily, without having to give them a password.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="maintainer">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@
<steps>
<title>Create a guest user account:</title>
- <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>Click <gui>User Accounts</gui>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the bottom left corner and type your
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the bottom-left corner and type your
password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to add user
accounts.</p></item>
<item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index bf64336..394b12c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -4,12 +4,13 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
+ <link type="seealso" xref="user-goodpassword"/>
<desc>Keep your account secure by changing your password often
in your account settings.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-25" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="incomplete"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,17 +20,32 @@
</info>
<title>Change your password</title>
+
+<comment>
+ <cite date="2011-04-15">shaunm</cite>
+ <p>We need a note in here about password hints. Share content
+ with user-add</p>
+</comment>
+
+<comment>
+ <cite date="2011-04-15">shaunm</cite>
+ <p>We need pages on the keyring. Link to them from the section
+ below on changing your keyring password. This page can still go
+ final for 3.0.x without that, but leave this comment in for 3.2.</p>
+</comment>
+
<p>It is a good idea to change your password from time to time, especially if you think someone else knows what your password is.</p>
<steps>
<item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>My Account</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>Click the button label next to <gui>Password</gui>. It should look
like a series of dots or boxes if you already have a password set.</p></item>
- <item><p>
- Fill in your <gui>Current password</gui>, a <gui>New password</gui>, and <gui>Confirmation password</gui> (which needs to be exactly the same as the <gui>New password</gui>).
- </p></item>
- <item><p>
- Click <gui>Change</gui>.
- </p></item>
+ <item><p>Enter your current password, then a new password. Enter your new
+ password again in the <gui>Confirm password</gui> field.</p>
+ <p>You can also click the button next to the
+ <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password. These
+ passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so
+ be careful.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p></item>
</steps>
<p>Make sure you <link xref="user-goodpassword">choose a good password</link>. This will help to keep your user account safe.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index 6d3909c..0902874 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
<desc>Add a bit of your personality to your login and user screens.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-02-24" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index c26e9eb..53c5897 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
<desc>Remove users that no longer use your computer.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="candidate"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
<email>tiffany antopolski com</email>
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@
your computer, you can delete that user's account.</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click your name in the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>Click <gui>User Accounts</gui>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the bottom left corner and type your
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the bottom-left corner and type your
password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to delete user
accounts.</p></item>
<item><p>Select the user you want to delete and click the <gui>-</gui> button.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page
index 9c1441f..11e373d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-forgottenpassword.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#passwords"/>
<desc>Advanced techniques for resetting your password.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-02-22" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="incomplete"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
index 0cc2e1c..f0e7fb1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-goodpassword.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<desc>Use longer, more complicated passwords.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-15" status="final"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
<email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -82,9 +82,4 @@
</item>
</list>
- <comment>
- <cite date="2010-10-31" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
- <p>Tips on what makes a secure password.</p>
- </comment>
-
</page>
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