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[gnome-user-docs] g-h/shell*: Minor edits, final for now

commit a9f0ddc15018bdc2f520af5bc3985c4ced711f58
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Tue Apr 5 13:58:45 2011 -0400

    g-h/shell*: Minor edits, final for now

 gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page               |    9 ++++++++-
 gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page             |    4 ++--
 ...rcequit.page => shell-apps-forcequit.page.stub} |    8 ++++++++
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page               |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page           |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page             |    8 +++++++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page          |    7 ++++++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page      |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page          |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces.page                 |    6 +++---
 gnome-help/Makefile.am                             |    1 -
 13 files changed, 43 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
index 482f249..67233e6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
    <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
    <desc>The screen resolution may be set incorrectly.</desc>	
-   <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="candidate"/>
+   <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -27,6 +27,13 @@
 
 <p>To solve this, click your name on the top bar and go to <gui>System Settings</gui>. In the Hardware section, choose <gui>Displays</gui>. Try some of the <gui>Resolution</gui> options and set the one that makes the screen look better.</p>
 
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Would like a little more explanation on native resolution, which
+  is generally only applicable on LCDs. There's a stub for using two
+  monitors. Link from section below when it's added.</p>
+</comment>
+
 <section id="multihead">
  <title>When multiple displays are connected</title>
  
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
index 0db730b..7963c62 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-resolution.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="look-display-fuzzy"/>
     
     <desc>Change the resolution of the screen and its orientation (rotation).</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
index d07d812..67bf5a6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#apps"/>
     
     <desc>Add (or remove) frequently-used program icons on the dash.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   <item><p>Open the <link xref="shell-terminology">Activities overview</link>.</p></item>
   <item>
    <p>Find the application you want to add to the dash by clicking on <gui>Applications</gui>. Right-click on the application icon and select <gui>Add to Favorites</gui>.</p>
-   <p>Alternately, you can click-and-drag the icon into the dock.</p>
+   <p>Alternately, you can click-and-drag the icon into the dash.</p>
   </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page.stub
similarity index 81%
rename from gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page
rename to gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page.stub
index b38053d..baae723 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page.stub
@@ -19,6 +19,14 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Force an unresponsive program to close</title>
+
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Force quit happens automatically when you try to close and the
+  window doesn't close. Mention that first, the rest in an advanced
+  section. Instructions don't seem to work for me. Removing for 3.0.
+  Revisit for 3.0.1.</p>
+</comment>
    <p> To force quit any application: </p>
    <steps>
      <item><p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index c2f721e..00bbd7c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#apps" />
     
     <desc>Launch apps from the the activities overview.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.9" date="2011-03-29" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page
index c537e03..a57f074 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-windows"/>
     
     <desc>Check the activities overview or look at other workspaces.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page
index d578d14..3daa866 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-windows"/>
 
     <desc>Double click on the top title bar.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <!-- See shell-windows-states -->
     
     <credit type="author">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
index c20ddae..2e42063 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <desc>Restore, resize, arrange and hide.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -18,6 +18,12 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Window operations and modes</title>
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Make more task-based. Maybe split up. Overview doesn't seem
+  as useful as it could be. Revisit hide/minimize terminology.
+  3.0.1.</p>
+</comment>
 <p>
    Windows work in a very similar way to windows on other operating systems.
 </p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
index 06f7ad6..b3627ac 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#apps"/>
     
     <desc>Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq>.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -20,6 +20,11 @@
 
 <title>Switch between windows</title>
 
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>More prose, talk about Alt+`. Maybe a screenshot. 3.0.1</p>
+</comment>
+
 <terms>
 
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page
index 1e4322d..5f4de0a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-movewindow.page
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
   <info>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="shell-workspaces"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="shell-workspaces"/>
     
     <desc>Go to the Activities overview and drag the window to a different workspace.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
  </item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>A faster way fo moving windows between workspaces is by using the keyboard:</p>
+<p>A faster way of moving windows between workspaces is by using the keyboard:</p>
 <steps>
  <item><p>Click on the window to make it <em>live</em>.</p></item>
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
index 8a7bc3c..275591a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces-switch.page
@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@
   <info>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces"/>
-    <link type="guide" xref="shell-workspaces"/>
+    <link type="seealso" xref="shell-workspaces"/>
     
     <desc>Go to the Activities overview and click one of the workspaces in the list on the right-hand side of the screen.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces.page
index 0876ed7..e53e513 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-workspaces.page
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="guide"
+      type="topic"
       id="shell-workspaces">
 
   <info>
 
-    <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces" group="#first"/>
     
     <desc>Workspaces are a way of grouping windows on your desktop.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/Makefile.am b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
index db1e2ab..ef865d2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/Makefile.am
+++ b/gnome-help/Makefile.am
@@ -198,7 +198,6 @@ DOC_PAGES = \
 	session-language.page \
 	session-screenlocks.page \
 	shell-apps-favorites.page \
-	shell-apps-forcequit.page \
 	shell-apps-open.page \
 	shell-exit.page \
 	shell-introduction.page \
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