[gnome-user-docs] g-h/shell-*: Change notification to message, some final

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 00df29f160d5a6c8262391e4f2cd793bbeeb858e
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Tue Apr 5 00:39:31 2011 -0400

    g-h/shell-*: Change notification to message, some final
    
    I'm not wholly pleased with all of these. I'd like to revisit
    some for 3.0.1. But it'll do for now.

 gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page |    7 ++++++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page     |   18 ++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page     |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page  |   10 +++++-----
 4 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
index 8455122..5985562 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-introduction.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <desc>A visual introduction to your desktop, the top bar, and the
     activities overview.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-30" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
@@ -20,6 +20,11 @@
 
 <title>Introduction to GNOME</title>
 
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Add a section on messages for 3.0.1</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>GNOME 3 features a completely reimagined user interface designed to
 stay out of your way, minimize distractions, and help you get things done.
 When you first log in, you will see an empty desktop and the top bar.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
index 48915b2..04647f1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#desktop" />
     
     <desc>Messages pop-up at the bottom of the screen telling you when certain events happen.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-20" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,23 +19,29 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Pop-up messages</title>
+<title>Messages and the message tray</title>
 
 <!-- 
 <p>Explain what messages/notifications are, why they are there, what you can do with them, replaying them, changing preferences etc.</p>
 -->
 
-<section id="what"><title>What are Messages?</title>
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>marked final because I want to get 3.0.0 out</p>
+  <p>please let's pizzazz this page up for 3.0.1</p>
+</comment>
+
+<section id="what"><title>What's a message?</title>
 <p>
 If an application wants to get your attention, it will show a message at the bottom of the screen.</p>
 <p>For example, if you want to open <gui>System Settings</gui> and it's already opened, a message will appear saying: "System Settings 'System Settings' is ready".
 </p>
 </section>
 
-<section id="replay">
- <title>Replay notifications</title>
+<section id="messagetray">
+ <title>The message tray</title>
  <p>If you missed one message shown or just want to replay it, move the pointer to the bottom-right corner and it will reappear.</p>
-<p>If more than one notification has been shown, you will have to click on the icon that represents the message you want to replay.</p>
+<p>If more than one message has been shown, you will have to click on the icon that represents the message you want to show.</p>
 </section>
 
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
index 801cbd1..58355d2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     <title role="trail" type="link">Overview</title>
     
     <desc>An overview of the different parts of the desktop.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-19" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
 <title>Overview of the desktop</title>
 
-<links type="topic" style="toronto"/>
+<links type="topic" style="2column"/>
 
 <section id="desktop" style="2column">
  <title>The Desktop</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index db41eda..39e995b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
     <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-19" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <title>Notifications</title>
-  <p><em>Notifications</em> are messages that pop-up at the bottom of the screen, telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting with you sends a message, a notification will pop-up to tell you.</p>
+  <title>Messages</title>
+  <p><em>Messages</em> are notifications that pop up at the bottom of the screen, telling you that something just happened. For example, when someone chatting with you sends a message, a message will pop up to tell you. If you don't want to deal with a message right now, it hides to your message tray. Move your mouse to the bottom-right corner to see your message tray.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
@@ -62,8 +62,8 @@
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <title>Workspace switcher</title>
-  <p>The <em>workspace switcher</em> is the list of workspaces that is shown on the right-hand side of the <gui>Windows</gui> view in the activities overview.</p>
+  <title>Workspace selector</title>
+  <p>The <em>workspace selector</em> is the list of workspaces that is shown on the right-hand side of the <gui>Windows</gui> view in the activities overview.</p>
  </item>
  
 </terms>