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[gnome-user-docs] g-h/power-*: More reviews, minor edits, all final

commit 69d73687f695f0fd3f4d54c74b7d7b2ef64d845f
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Mon Apr 4 21:23:44 2011 -0400

    g-h/power-*: More reviews, minor edits, all final

 gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page         |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page      |    7 +------
 gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page      |   10 ++--------
 gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page     |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page      |    7 ++++++-
 gnome-help/C/power-suspendhibernate.page |   10 +++++++++-
 gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page    |    4 +++-
 7 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
index 39b3b71..0285845 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-closelid.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="power-suspendfail"/>
     
     <desc>Laptops go to sleep when you close the lid, in order to save power.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 
 <p>When you close the lid of your laptop, your computer will <em>suspend</em> in order to save power. This means that the computer is not actually turned off - it has just gone to sleep. You can wake it up by opening the lid. If it doesn't wake up, try clicking the mouse or pressing a key. If that still doesn't work, press the power button.</p>
 
-<p>Some computers are unable to suspend properly, normally because their hardware isn't completely supported by the operating system (e.g. the Linux drivers are incomplete). In this case, you may find that you are unable to wake-up your computer after you've closed the lid. You can try to <link xref="power-suspendfail">fix the problem with suspend</link>, or you can prevent the computer from trying to suspend when you close the lid.</p>
+<p>Some computers are unable to suspend properly, normally because their hardware isn't completely supported by the operating system (e.g. the Linux drivers are incomplete). In this case, you may find that you are unable to wake up your computer after you've closed the lid. You can try to <link xref="power-suspendfail">fix the problem with suspend</link>, or you can prevent the computer from trying to suspend when you close the lid.</p>
 
 <section id="nosuspend">
  <title>Stop the computer from suspending when the lid is closed</title>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page b/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
index 34dbdae..443d3ae 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-constantfan.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
     <desc>Some fan-control software could be missing, or your laptop may be running hot.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -24,9 +24,4 @@
 
 <p>It is also possible that your laptop just produces a lot of heat. This does not necessarily mean that it is overheating; it might just need the fan to run at full speed all of the time to allow it to stay cool enough. If this is the case, you have little option but to let the fan run at full speed all of the time. You can sometimes buy additional cooling accessories for your laptop which may help.</p>
 
-  <comment>
-   <cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
-   <p>Explain why the fan might always be running. It could be because the processor is always running at its full clock speed, or that the Linux drivers for the motherboard don't handle the fan very well.</p>
-  </comment>
-	
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page b/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
index 1ad7315..dafd036 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <desc>Computers usually get warm, but if they get too hot they can overheat, which can be damaging.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
 <title>My computer gets really hot</title>
 
-<p>Most computers get warm after a while, and some can get quite hot. This is normal, simply part of the way that the computer cools itself. However, if you computer gets very warm it could be a sign that it is overheating, which can potentially cause damage.</p>
+<p>Most computers get warm after a while, and some can get quite hot. This is normal: it's simply part of the way that the computer cools itself. However, if your computer gets very warm it could be a sign that it is overheating, which can potentially cause damage.</p>
 
 <p>Most laptops get reasonably warm once you have been using them for a while. It's generally nothing to worry about - computers produce a lot of heat and laptops are very compact, so they need to remove their heat rapidly and their outer casing warms up as a result. Some laptops do get too hot, however, and may be uncomfortable to use. This is normally the result of a poorly-designed cooling system. You can sometimes get additional cooling accessories which fit to the bottom of the laptop and provide more efficient cooling.</p>
 
@@ -27,10 +27,4 @@
 
 <p>Most modern computers will shut themselves down if they get too hot, in order to prevent damage from occurring. If your computer keeps shutting down, this might be the reason. If your computer is overheating, you will probably need to get it repaired.</p>
 
-  <comment>
-   <cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
-   <p>Explain that this is usually OK, but sometimes you might need to check that it's not overheating. List ways to keep the computer cool. Mention how to check the CPU/system temperature (probably have to use the terminal).</p>
-   <p>Some people may be worried that there is a health risk in having a hot computer on their lap. I think sperm start dying-off above 14 degrees C, so it seems plausible that there could be at least a short-term impact on male fertility. If you're feeling up to it, point to (and briefly summarise) some decent web resource on the issue.</p>
-  </comment>
-	
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
index 76d7bdb..931181f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-othercountry.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="power#problems"/>
     <desc>Your computer will work, but you might need a different power cable or a travel adapter.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
index 139e348..69ad0ac 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendfail.page
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     
     <desc>Some computer hardware causes problems with suspend/hibernate.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -20,6 +20,11 @@
 
 <title>Why won't my computer turn back on after I sent it to sleep?</title>
 
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Marked incomplete as of 2011-04-04. Marking final for 3.0. Revisit for 3.2</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>If you send your computer to sleep (suspend it) or hibernate it, then try to wake it up or turn it back on, you may find that it doesn't work as you expected. This could be because suspend/hibernate aren't supported properly by your hardware.</p>
 
 <section id="wakeup">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendhibernate.page b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendhibernate.page
index 0c35ce8..0cf73a8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-suspendhibernate.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-suspendhibernate.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     
     <desc>Suspend sends it to sleep; hibernate saves your files but completely switches off the power.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,6 +19,14 @@
 
 <title>What happens when I suspend/hibernate the computer?</title>
 
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-04">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Marking final for 3.0. Would like a slightly better explanation on what
+  "saved to disk" means for hibernate. As written, could be confused with open
+  files being saved, which they aren't, per se. Link to topics on controlling
+  suspend/hibernate behavior.</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>When you <em>suspend</em> the computer, you send it to sleep. All of your applications and documents remain open, but the screen and other parts of the computer switch off to save power. The computer is still switched on though, and it will still be using a small amount of power. You can wake it up by pressing a key or clicking the mouse. If that doesn't work, try pressing the power button.</p>
 
 <p>When you <em>hibernate</em> the computer, all of your applications and documents remain open (actually, they are saved to disk) and the computer completely switches off, so it doesn't use any power. It is like shutting down, but your applications and documents will still be open when you switch on the computer again.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page b/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
index 7cec1bd..6a992e8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-willnotturnon.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics" group="#last"/>
     
     <desc>Loose cables and hardware problems are possible reasons.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="incomplete"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -23,6 +23,8 @@
   <comment>
    <cite date="2010-06-29" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
    <p>This is a complicated topic. Give troubleshooting steps/reasons for why the computer won't turn on. Some of the reasons may be down to hardware failure.</p>
+   <p>This was marked incomplete as of 2011-04-04. I marked it final
+   for 3.0. If there's more to add, revisit for 3.2.</p>
   </comment>
 	
 <section id="nopower">
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