[gnome-user-docs] g-h: Minor edits



commit c41de320d8ed4c2f920f94872d49dddb83470de0
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Mon Apr 4 15:09:34 2011 -0400

    g-h: Minor edits

 gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page    |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page b/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
index 750b881..1ad7315 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/power-hotcomputer.page
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 
 <p>If you have a desktop computer which feels hot to the touch, it may have insufficient cooling. If this concerns you, you can buy extra cooling fans or check that the cooling fans and vents are free from dust and other blockages. You might want to consider putting the computer in a better-ventilated area too - if kept in confined spaces (e.g. in a cupboard), the computer's cooling system may not be able to remove heat and circulate cool air fast enough.</p>
 
-<p>Some people are concerned about the health risks of using hot laptops. There are suggestions that prolonged use of a hot laptop on your lap might possibly reduce (male) fertility, and there are reports of minor burns being suffered too (in extreme cases). If you are concerned about these potential problems, you may wish to consult a medical practitioner for advice. Of course, you can simply choose not to rest the laptop on your lap too.</p>
+<p>Some people are concerned about the health risks of using hot laptops. There are suggestions that prolonged use of a hot laptop on your lap might possibly reduce (male) fertility, and there are reports of minor burns being suffered too (in extreme cases). If you are concerned about these potential problems, you may wish to consult a medical practitioner for advice. Of course, you can simply choose not to rest the laptop on your lap.</p>
 
 <p>Most modern computers will shut themselves down if they get too hot, in order to prevent damage from occurring. If your computer keeps shutting down, this might be the reason. If your computer is overheating, you will probably need to get it repaired.</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
index ed8abc7..48915b2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
@@ -27,15 +27,15 @@
 
 <section id="what"><title>What are Messages?</title>
 <p>
-If an application wants to get your attention, it'll show a message at the bottom of the screen.</p>
-<p>For example, if you want to open <gui>System Settings</gui> and it's already opened, it will appear a message that says: "System Settings 'System Settings' is ready".
+If an application wants to get your attention, it will show a message at the bottom of the screen.</p>
+<p>For example, if you want to open <gui>System Settings</gui> and it's already opened, a message will appear saying: "System Settings 'System Settings' is ready".
 </p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="replay">
  <title>Replay notifications</title>
- <p>If you missed one message shown or just want to replay it, just move the pointer to the right-bottom corner and it will reappear.</p>
-<p>If more than one notifications has been shown, you will have to click in the icon that represents the message you want to replay.</p>
+ <p>If you missed one message shown or just want to replay it, move the pointer to the bottom-right corner and it will reappear.</p>
+<p>If more than one notification has been shown, you will have to click on the icon that represents the message you want to replay.</p>
 </section>
 
 



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