[gnome-user-docs] g-h/mouse-problem-notmoving: Minor edits, final



commit 45b6adedff5bcbf526e2011ddefe2d37e943ea69
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Sun Apr 3 19:07:52 2011 -0400

    g-h/mouse-problem-notmoving: Minor edits, final

 gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page |   11 ++++++-----
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
index 26c0e6a..c5cce4d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     How to check your mouse if it is not working.
     </desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
         <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -18,9 +18,10 @@
 
 <title>Mouse pointer not moving</title>
 
+<links type="section"/>
 
 <section id="plugged-in">
- <title>Check That the Mouse is Plugged In</title>
+ <title>Check that the mouse is plugged in</title>
  <p>
  If you have a mouse with a cable, check that it is firmly plugged in to 
  your computer.
@@ -35,7 +36,7 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="connected">
- <title>Check That the Mouse was Recognized by Your Computer</title>
+ <title>Check that the mouse was recognized by your computer</title>
  <steps>
   <item>
    <p>
@@ -70,7 +71,7 @@
  
  <p>
  It can be complicated to fix problems with mouse detection. Ask for support 
- from your distribution/vendor if you think that your mouse has not been 
+ from your distribution or vendor if you think that your mouse has not been 
  detected properly.
  </p>
  
@@ -84,7 +85,7 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="broken">
- <title>Check the Mouse Actually Works</title>
+ <title>Check that the mouse actually works</title>
  <p>
  Plug the mouse in to a different computer and see if it works.
  </p>



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