[gnome-user-docs] g-h/nautilus-bookmarks-edit: Minor edits, final

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 7226f68833860a88a6fde879e90cfbc7a0cbc18f
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Sat Apr 2 22:41:56 2011 -0400

    g-h/nautilus-bookmarks-edit: Minor edits, final

 gnome-help/C/nautilus-bookmarks-edit.page |   34 +++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 23 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-bookmarks-edit.page b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-bookmarks-edit.page
index 99968e8..e8858fc 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/nautilus-bookmarks-edit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/nautilus-bookmarks-edit.page
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#faq"/>
-    <desc>Add, delete and rename <app>Files</app> application bookmarks.</desc>
+    <desc>Add, delete, and rename bookmarks in the file manager.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-29" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-02" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -18,45 +18,33 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Edit folder bookmarks</title>
-<p>Your bookmarks are listed in the <gui>Bookmarks</gui> menu..</p>
-<terms>
- <item>
- <title>Delete a bookmark:</title>
+<p>Your bookmarks are listed in the <gui>Bookmarks</gui> menu of the file manager.</p>
   <steps>
+ <title>Delete a bookmark:</title>
    <item><p>Click on <guiseq><gui>Bookmarks</gui><gui>Edit Bookmarks</gui></guiseq>. </p></item>
   <item><p>In the <gui>Edit Bookmarks</gui> window, select the bookmark you wish to delete and click <gui>Remove</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item>
    </steps>  
-  </item>
 
-  <item>
-    <title>Add a bookmark:</title>
     <steps>
+    <title>Add a bookmark:</title>
     <item><p>Open the folder (or location) that you want to bookmark.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Bookmarks</gui><gui>Add Bookmark</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
     </steps>
-  </item>
 
-  <item>
-   <title>Rename a bookmark</title>
     <steps>
+   <title>Rename a bookmark</title>
     <item><p>Click on <guiseq><gui>Bookmarks</gui><gui>Edit Bookmarks</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
     <item><p>In the <gui>Edit Bookmarks</gui> window, select the bookmark you wish to rename.</p></item>
     <item><p>In the <gui>Name</gui> textbox, type the new name for the bookmark.</p>
     <note>
-     <list>
-     <item>
-     <p>Renaming a bookmark does not rename the folder.</p>
-     </item>
-     <item>
-     <p>Bookmark names do not have to be unique.  This means it is possible to have multiple bookmarks with the same name, all going to different folders.  There is no way of telling which location is which.  In general, you would not have the need to do this.</p>
-     </item>
-    </list>
+     <p>Renaming a bookmark does not rename the folder. If you have bookmarks
+     to two different folders in two different locations, but which each have
+     the same name, the bookmarks will have the same name, and you won't be
+     able to tell them apart. In these cases, it is useful to give a bookmark
+     a name other than the name of the folder it points to.</p>
     </note>
 </item>
     </steps>
-  </item>
-
-</terms>
 
 </page>