[gnome-user-docs] g-h/sound-*: Minor edits, marking review pages final

[Shaun McCance <shaunm src gnome org>]

commit 23f4a3e9179c6f7636fef850ab28d5034c2cfa4a
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Fri Apr 1 11:07:17 2011 -0400

    g-h/sound-*: Minor edits, marking review pages final

 gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page  |    4 ++--
 gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page |   20 ++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page |   12 ++++++------
 gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page  |    2 +-
 4 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page
index 349752b..fbc1ee2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-broken.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="guide"
+      type="guide" style="problem"
       id="sound-broken">
 
   <info>
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     
     <desc>Troubleshoot problems like having no sound or having poor sound quality.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
index ecdef59..6574aaa 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic"
+      type="topic" style="problem"
       id="sound-crackle">
 
   <info>
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
     <desc>Check your audio cables and sound card drivers.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -23,19 +23,27 @@
 <list>
  <item>
   <p>Check that the speakers are plugged in correctly.</p>
-  <p>If the speakers aren't fully plugged-in, or if they are plugged into the wrong socket, you might hear a buzzing sound.</p>
+  <p>If the speakers aren't fully plugged in, or if they are plugged into the wrong socket, you might hear a buzzing sound.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <p>Make sure the speaker/headphone cable isn't damaged.</p>
-  <p>Audio cables and connectors can gradually wear with use. Try plugging the cable/headphones into another audio device (like an MP3 player or a CD player) to check if there is still a crackling sound. If there is, you may need to replace the cable/headphones.</p>
+  <p>Audio cables and connectors can gradually wear with use. Try plugging the cable or headphones into another audio device (like an MP3 player or a CD player) to check if there is still a crackling sound. If there is, you may need to replace the cable or headphones.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <p>Check if the sound drivers aren't very good.</p>
-  <p>Some sound cards don't work very well on Linux because they don't have very good drivers. This problem is more difficult to identify - try searching for the make and model of your sound card on the internet, plus the search term "Linux", to see if other people are having the same problem.</p>
-  <p>You can use the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command to <link xref="">get more information about your sound card</link>.</p>
+  <p>Some sound cards don't work very well on Linux because they don't have very good drivers. This problem is more difficult to identify. Try searching for the make and model of your sound card on the internet, plus the search term "Linux", to see if other people are having the same problem.</p>
+  <p>You can use the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command to get more information about your sound card.</p>
  </item>
 </list>
 
+<comment>
+  <cite date="2011-04-01">shaunm</cite>
+  <p>Are we shipping any sort of device manager? If we do (or even if we
+  recommend one, but people need to install it), and if you can get all
+  the information you need about the sound card from that, we should
+  link to that for getting info on your sound card.</p>
+</comment>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
index e2937ad..9871621 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic"
+      type="topic" style="problem"
       id="sound-nosound">
 
   <info>
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     
     <desc>Check that it's not muted, that cables are plugged in properly, and that the sound card is detected.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-26" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
 <section id="mute">
  <title>Make sure that the sound is not muted</title>
  <p>Click the sound icon on the top panel (it looks like a speaker) and make sure that the sound is not muted or turned right down.</p>
- <p>Some laptops have mute switches or keys on their keyboards - try pressing that key to see if it unmutes the sound.</p>
+ <p>Some laptops have mute switches or keys on their keyboardsâ??try pressing that key to see if it unmutes the sound.</p>
  <p>You should also check that you haven't muted the application that you're using to play sound (e.g. your music player or movie player). The application may have a mute or volume button in its main window, so check that. Also, click the sound icon on the top panel and choose <gui>Sound Preferences</gui>. When the <gui>Sound</gui> window appears, go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and check that your application is not muted on there.</p>
 </section>
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
    <p>In the <gui>Sound</gui> window that appears, go to the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab. Make a note of which device and which profile are selected (so you can return to the default selections if changing them doesn't work).</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>For the selected device, try changing the profile - play a sound after you change the profile to see if it works. You might need to go through the list and try each profile.</p>
+   <p>For the selected device, try changing the profileâ??play a sound after you change the profile to see if it works. You might need to go through the list and try each profile.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
    <p>If that doesn't work, you might want to try doing the same for any other devices that are listed.</p>
@@ -75,11 +75,11 @@
  
  <p>If your sound card is not detected, you may need to manually install the drivers for it. How you do this will depend on the card you have.</p>
  
- <p>You can see what sound card you have by using the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command in the Terminal. You may have to run <cmd>lspci</cmd> as <link xref="user-admin-explain">superuser</link>; either type <cmd>sudo lspci</cmd> and type your password, or type <cmd>su</cmd>, enter the <em>root</em> (administrative) password, then type <cmd>lspci</cmd>. See if an <em>audio controller</em> or <em>audio device</em> is listed - it should have the sound card's make and model number. <cmd>lspci -v</cmd> will show a list with more detailed information.</p>
+ <p>You can see what sound card you have by using the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command in the Terminal. You may have to run <cmd>lspci</cmd> as <link xref="user-admin-explain">superuser</link>; either type <cmd>sudo lspci</cmd> and type your password, or type <cmd>su</cmd>, enter the <em>root</em> (administrative) password, then type <cmd>lspci</cmd>. See if an <em>audio controller</em> or <em>audio device</em> is listedâ??it should have the sound card's make and model number. <cmd>lspci -v</cmd> will show a list with more detailed information.</p>
   
  <p>You may be able to find and install drivers for your card. It's best to ask on support forums (or otherwise) for your Linux distribution for instructions.</p>
  
- <p>If you can't get drivers for your sound card, you might prefer to buy a new sound card. You can get sound cards that can be installe dinside the computer and external USB sound cards.</p>
+ <p>If you can't get drivers for your sound card, you might prefer to buy a new sound card. You can get sound cards that can be installed inside the computer and external USB sound cards.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
index e751bc8..8a2a983 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="sound-volume">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-29" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>