[gnome-user-docs] Final review for two files- pages

[Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>]

commit cc4ae17612b910b91a61f973196b43553b8b193f
Author: Aline Bessa <alibezz gmail com>
Date:   Fri Apr 1 14:52:19 2011 +0100

    Final review for two files- pages

 gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page |   12 ++++++------
 gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page  |    7 ++++---
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page b/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
index 810c6fa..dd6c02c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-hidden.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="files#faq"/>
     <desc>Make a file invisible, so you can't see it in the file manager.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-03-29" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
 <p>You can hide files by renaming them with a <key>.</key> at the beginning of their name. Hidden files are invisible by default; they are not displayed in the file manager, but they are still there in the folder.</p>
 
-<p>To hide a file, <link xref="files-rename">rename it</link> with a "." at the beginning of its name. For example, to hide a file <file>example.txt</file>, you would rename it to <file>.example.txt</file>.</p>
+<p>To hide a file, <link xref="files-rename">rename it</link> with a "." at the beginning of its name. For example, to hide a file <file>example.txt</file>, you should rename it to <file>.example.txt</file>.</p>
 
 <note style="tip">
  <p>You can hide folders in the same way that you can hide files. Rename the folder with a "." at the beginning of its name.</p>
@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@
 <section id="show-hidden">
  <title>Show all hidden files</title>
  <p>
- If you want to see all of the hidden files in a folder, go to that folder  and click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>. All of the hidden files will be shown along with the files that were not hidden.
+ If you want to see all hidden files in a folder, go to that folder and either click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. All hidden files will be shown along with the files that were not hidden.
  </p>
  <p>
   Some hidden files will have a "." at the beginning of their name. Others might have a "~" at the end of their name instead (see <link xref="files-tilde"/>).
  </p>
  <p>
- To hide these files again, click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> again.
+ To hide these files again, either click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq> again.
  </p>
 </section>
 
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@
  To unhide a file, go to the folder containing the hidden file and click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq>. Then, find the hidden file and rename it so that it doesn't have a "." in front of its name.
  </p>
  <p>
- For example, to unhide a file called <file>.example.txt</file>, you would rename it to <file>example.txt</file>.
+ For example, to unhide a file called <file>.example.txt</file>, you should rename it to <file>example.txt</file>.
  </p>
  <p>
- Once you have renamed the file, click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> to hide any other hidden files again.
+ Once you have renamed the file, you can either click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Show Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq> to hide any other hidden files again.
  </p>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page b/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
index 14061c5..beed837 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="files-hidden"/>
     <desc>These are backup files. They are hidden by default.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-02-25" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="1.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -20,9 +20,10 @@
 <title>What is a file with a "~" at the end of its name?</title>
 
 <note>
-<p>These files are hidden by default. You are able to view them because you either selected <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or pressed <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.  You can hide them again by following those steps again. </p> 
+<p>Files with a "~" at the end of their names (for example, <file>example.txt~</file>) are automatically created backup copies of documents edited in the <app>Gedit</app> text editor, as well as in other applications. It is normally safe to delete them, but there really is no need to. </p>
+
+<p>These files are hidden by default. If you are seeing them, that is because you either selected <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or pressed <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. You can hide them again by repeating one of these steps. </p> 
 </note>
-<p>Files with "~" at the end of their names (for example, <file>example.txt~</file>) are automatically created backup copies of documents edited in <app>Gedit</app>, the <gui>Gnome Text Editor</gui>, as well as other applications. It is normally safe to delete them, but there really is no need to.  You can just click <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> to hide them.</p>
 
 <p>These files are treated in the same way as normal hidden files. See <link xref="files-hidden"/> for advice on dealing with hidden files.</p>