[gnome-user-docs] Patch from Mike Hill for keyboard shortcuts, review screencasts topic

[Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>]

commit 98d8066bdeeee564481cff018b7adcb5d1227d0d
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Fri Apr 1 12:22:38 2011 +0100

    Patch from Mike Hill for keyboard shortcuts, review screencasts topic

 gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page       |   92 ++++++++++------------------
 gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page |   44 +++++++++++--
 2 files changed, 70 insertions(+), 66 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page b/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
index dcf9a72..8f821f2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/screen-shot-record.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="tips"/>
     
     <desc>Take a picture or record a video of what's happening on your screen.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -18,89 +18,61 @@
 
 <title>Screenshots and screencasts</title>
 
+<p>You can take a picture of your screen (a <em>screenshot</em>) or record a video of what's happening on the screen (a <em>screencast</em>). This is useful if you want to show someone how to do something on the computer, for example; screenshots and screencasts are just normal picture/video files, so you can email them and share them on the web.</p>
+
 <section id="screenshot">
- <title>Screenshot</title>
+ <title>Take a screenshot</title>
+ <p>To take a picture of what's on your screen:</p>
 <steps>
-<item><p>
-Enter the  <gui>Activities</gui>  overview by pressing  <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F1</key></keyseq>  or by touching the cursor to the <link xref="shell-terminology">hot corner</link>, or by pressing the <link xref="shell-terminology">windows</link> key.
-</p></item>
-<item><p>
-Type <input>screenshot</input>.
-</p></item>
-<item><p>
-Press <key>Enter</key>.
-</p></item>
+<item>
+ <p>Go to the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and open the <app>Screenshot</app> tool.</p>
+</item>
  
-<item><p>Select:</p>
-<list>
-<item><p>
-<gui>Grab the whole desktop</gui>, or
-</p></item>
-<item><p>
-<gui>Grab the current window</gui>, or
-</p></item>
-<item><p>
-<gui>Select the area to grab</gui>.
-
-</p></item>
-</list>
+<item>
+ <p>In the window that appears, choose what to take a picture of.</p>
+ <p>You can take a picture of the whole of the screen (<gui>Grab the whole desktop</gui>), just the window that you're currently using (<gui>Grab the current window</gui>), or you can select an area of the screen by dragging a box around it (<gui>Select the area to grab</gui>).</p>
 </item>
+
 <item><p>
-Click <gui>Take ScreenShot</gui>.
+Click <gui>Take Screenshot</gui>.
 </p>
-<note>
 <p>
 If you selected <gui>Select area to grab</gui>, the cursor will change into a cross. Click and drag the area you want for the screenshot.
 </p>
-</note>
 </item>
-<item><p>
-The <gui>Save Screenshot</gui> dialog will now appear.</p>
-<steps>
-<item><p>
-   Type a <gui>Name</gui> for your file.
-</p></item>
-<item><p>
- Select a folder to save your file in from the dropdown menu.
- </p></item>
-</steps></item>
-<item><p>
-Click <gui>Save</gui>.
-</p></item>
 
+<item><p>
+The <gui>Save Screenshot</gui> window will now appear. Choose where to save the screenshot and click <gui>Save</gui>.</p>
+</item>
 </steps>
 </section>
 
-<section id="screencast"><title>Screencast</title>
+
+
+<section id="screencast">
+<title>Make a screencast</title>
 <p>
-This feature allows you to make a recording of what is happening on your computer monitor.
+You can make a video recording of what is happening on your screen:
 </p>
 
 <steps>
 <item>
-<p>
-Press <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>Shift</key><key>Alt</key><key>R</key></keyseq> to start (and to stop the reocording).
-</p>
-<note>
-<p>
-A red circle is displayed in the bottom right corner of the screen when the recording is in progress.
-</p>
-</note>
-
-<note style = "tip"><p>
- After you stop the recordingm a file named 'shell-%d%u-%c.webm' is saved in the home directory. In the filename, %d is the date, %u is a string that makes the filename unique, and %c is a counter that is incremented each time a recording is made within a single gnome-shell session. 
- </p>
- </note>
+ <p>Press <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>Shift</key><key>Alt</key><key>R</key></keyseq> to start recording what's on your screen.</p>
+ <p>A red circle is displayed in the bottom right corner of the screen when the recording is in progress.</p>
+</item>
 
+<item>
+ <p>Once you've finished, press <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>Shift</key><key>Alt</key><key>R</key></keyseq> again to stop the recording.</p>
 </item>
 
+<item>
+ <p>A file named <file>shell-%d%u-%c.webm</file> will be saved in your Home folder.</p>
+ <p>In the filename, %d is the date, %u is a string of letters that makes the filename unique, and %c is a counter that is incremented each time a recording is made within a single session.</p>
+</item>
 
 <item>
-<p>
- You can <link xref="files-rename">rename</link> the file as you wish.
- </p>
- </item>
- 
+ <p>You can <link xref="files-rename">rename</link> the file as you wish.</p>
+</item> 
 </steps>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
index 3b7570f..d7b17d9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic"
+      type="topic" style="tip"
       id="shell-keyboard-shortcuts">
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="tips"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview"/>
     
-    <desc>XXXXX</desc>
+    <desc>Getting around the desktop using the keyboard.</desc>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-25" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-01" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -19,8 +19,40 @@
 
 <title>Useful keyboard shortcuts</title>
 
-<comment>
- <p>A list of useful keyboard shortcuts for getting around in GNOME Shell. May alos be worth mentioning *a few* basic general shortcuts, like Ctrl+C for copy. Don't get too detailed, though.</p>
-</comment>
+<table>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F1</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Switch between the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and desktop</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><key>Windows</key> key</p></td> <td><p>Switch between the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and desktop (<link xref="windows-key">What is the windows key?</link>)</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Pop up command window (for quickly running commands)</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p><link xref="shell-windows-switching">Quickly switch between windows</link></p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Cycle in reverse direction in the window switcher</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>`</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Switch between windows from the same application in the <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> window switcher</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Pop up place cycler</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>R</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p><link xref="screen-shot-record">Start and end screencast recording</link></p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>D</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Show desktop and raise windows</p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Up/Down</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p><link xref="shell-workspaces">Switch between workspaces</link></p></td>
+  </tr>
+  <tr>
+    <td><p><keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>Up/Down</key></keyseq></p></td> <td><p>Move the current window to a different workspace</p></td>
+  </tr>
+</table>
 	
 </page>