[release-notes/gnome-2-32] Fix typos and re-phrase sentences

[Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>]

commit c07c499df8c4b3b0ab408c2d667ae50d9bbfacac
Author: Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>
Date:   Thu Sep 23 20:03:48 2010 -0500

    Fix typos and re-phrase sentences

 help/C/rna11y.xml           |   24 +++++++++++-------------
 help/C/rnlookingforward.xml |   32 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
 help/C/rnusers.xml          |    6 +++---
 3 files changed, 46 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rna11y.xml b/help/C/rna11y.xml
index 8677cd2..1c4993d 100644
--- a/help/C/rna11y.xml
+++ b/help/C/rna11y.xml
@@ -11,31 +11,29 @@
 		<para>
 	 GNOME has a passion for making software available to everyone, including
 	 users and developers with impairments that can make it harder to use their
-	 computers. To help, GNOME created the GNOME Accessibility Project and an
-	 accessibility framework that is now a standard on libre desktops.
+	 computers. In order to make it easier for those with disabilities
+	 to use their computer,  GNOME created the GNOME Accessibility Project and an
+	 accessibility framework that is now a standard in free software.
 	</para>
 
 	<para>
 	 GNOME &gnomeversion; continues to build on its prior accessibility
-	 credentials with several improvements.
+	 capabilities with several improvements.
 	</para>
 
 	<sect2 id="mousteweaks">
 	 <title>Mousetweaks</title>
 	 
-	 <para><application>Mousetweaks</application> is an accessibility application 
-	 that helps users who may
-	 have limited ability to use a mouse.  Mousetweaks allows you to open a menu
-	 by pressing and holding the left mousebutton to allow you to perform actions
-	 typically available via right click; perform mouse clicks such as left click,
-	 double click, drag and right click via software for users who cannot 
-	 manipulate buttons; and lock the pointer on an area of the screen 
-	 temporarily for users who use their pointing hardware on more than just 
-	 their computer.
+	 <para><application>Mousetweaks</application> makes it easier to use a mouse 
+	 for those users who may have limited mobility. Using Mousetweaks you can use 
+	 the left mouse button to do both left and right mouse clicks. For  example, 
+	 you open a menu by pressing and holding the left mouse button. Mousetweaks 
+	 also helps make it easier to left click, double click, drag and right click 
+	 for users who cannot manipulate buttons well.
 	 </para>
 	 
 	 <para>
-	   Mousetweaks has update documentation including an updated manual and
+	   Mousetweaks has updated documentation including an updated manual and
 	   man pages.
 	 </para>
 	 
diff --git a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
index 224e6ca..07db4a1 100644
--- a/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnlookingforward.xml
@@ -9,5 +9,37 @@
 <sect1 id="rnlookingforward">
 	<title>Looking Forward to GNOME &nextversion;</title>
 
+	<para>
+		Development doesn't stop with GNOME &gnomeversion;. Work has already begun
+		on GNOME &nextversion;, due to be released exactly six months after
+		&gnomeversion;.
+	</para>
+	
+	<para>GNOME 3.0 will continue to provide the desktop platform and applications
+	 it always has, and will also feature a new user interface in GNOME Shell 
+	 and the GNOME Activity Journal which easily helps you browse
+	and find files on your computer.  GNOME 3.0 also will include new features 
+	in accessibility, new user help and documentation, GNOME's first web service
+	 in Tomboy Online and more.  For developers, GNOME 2.30 deprecates a 
+	 number of old libraries. 		
+	</para>
+	
+		<para>
+		<ulink url="http://live.gnome.org/RoadMap";>GNOME's roadmap</ulink> 
+		details the developers' 
+		plans for the next release cycle, the 
+		<ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/start/unstable/";>GNOME &nextversion; 
+		release schedule</ulink> was released
+		earlier this year and is 
+		<ulink url="http://www.gnome.org/start/unstable";>available on the GNOME wiki</ulink>.
+	</para>
+	
+	<para>GNOME3.org will be launching in the near future and will provide
+	videos, screenshots and information about GNOME 3.0's new features, 
+	applications and more.  Watch <ulink url="http://www.gnome.org";>GNOME.org</ulink>
+		for more information soon.
+	</para>
+	
+
 </sect1>
 <!-- vi:set tw=80 ts=2: -->
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 7c3def1..d1de4f4 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -134,9 +134,9 @@
 				faster and more responsive when loading playlists.
 			</para></listitem>
 			<listitem><para>
-			<application>GNOME System Tools</application>, has added support for
-			movings or changing the owner if the file is already present when 
-			changing the path to a user's home directory.
+			<application>GNOME System Tools</application> now allows users to change 
+			the owner of the file if they are moving in into their home directory
+			and it's already present.
 			</para></listitem>
 		</itemizedlist>