[pygtk-web] 2010-10-28 Rafael Villar Burke <pachi rvburke com>

[Rafael Villar Burke <rvburke src gnome org>]

commit 11408ce8e9e2d3a93d508c792e4c832929c35fb6
Author: Rafael Villar Burke <pachi rvburke com>
Date:   Thu Oct 28 17:12:39 2010 +0200

    2010-10-28  Rafael Villar Burke  <pachi rvburke com>
    
    	* about.src downloads.src: Grammar and spell corrections

 ChangeLog     |    4 ++++
 about.src     |    8 ++++----
 downloads.src |   10 +++++-----
 3 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index 4ae576a..fb20178 100644
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -1,3 +1,7 @@
+2010-10-28  Rafael Villar Burke  <pachi rvburke com>
+
+	* about.src downloads.src: Grammar and spell corrections
+
 2010-10-22  Rafael Villar Burke  <pachi rvburke com>
 
 	* applications.src: Fix pytrainer and EduKT broken link
diff --git a/about.src b/about.src
index 7944d18..374345f 100644
--- a/about.src
+++ b/about.src
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ for the most complex interfaces</p>
 PyGTK uses the <a href="http://www.gtk.org/";>GTK+ toolkit</a> to offer a
 <b>comprehensive set of graphical elements</b> and other useful programming
 facilities, like the handling of <b>internationalized text</b> (bidirectional
-text or non-latin gliph sets), first class accesibility support through
+text or non-Latin glyph sets), first class accesibility support through
 the <b>Gnome Accessibility Framework</b> (ATK library)...
 </p>
 <p>
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ unmodified, on Linux, Windows, MacOS X and other platforms.
 </p>
 <p>
 You can see some of the <a href="applications.html">applications</a> where
-PyGTK is being used, which range from small single purpose scripts up to large
+PyGTK is being used, which range from small single-purpose scripts up to large
 full featured applications.
 </p>
 <div class="clear"/>
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ including code, documentation and user support (listed alphabetically):</p>
   Fontilus and the Nautilus RPM.</dd>
 
   <dt><a href="http://www.async.com.br/~jdahlin/";>Johan Dahlin</a></dt>
-  <dd>This swede has helped James a lot with PyGTK, specially with the
+  <dd>This Swede has helped James a lot with PyGTK, specially with the
   GTK+ 2.x port. Currently the maintainer of PyGTK. Wrote a big part of
   the gnome-python bindings. Also maintains the nautilus-python package.
   </dd>
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ including code, documentation and user support (listed alphabetically):</p>
   <dt>Xavier Ordoquy</dt>
   <dd>Works on misc parts of the project to help when needed (code,
   articles, support on IRC). Also working on
-  <a href="http://gael.sourceforge.net/";>Gael</a></dd>
+  <a href="http://gael.sourceforge.net/";>Gael</a>.</dd>
 </dl>
 
 </div>
diff --git a/downloads.src b/downloads.src
index 5084c52..88f3a2e 100644
--- a/downloads.src
+++ b/downloads.src
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 <ul>
 <li>A <strong>Python interpreter</strong> for Windows (you can get it at the
     <a href="http://www.python.org/download/";>Python downloads</a>) page.</li>
-<li>The <strong>GTK+ runtime</strong>. We recommend to install it using
+<li>The <strong>GTK+ runtime</strong>. We recommend that you install it using
     the <a href="http://www.gtk.org/download-windows.html#StableRelease";>
     official GTK+ bundle</a> (gtk+-bundle*.zip files). Just choose the latest
     version available.<br />
@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@
     version).<br />
     When downloading them, you must make sure that the PyCairo,
     PyGObject and PyGTK versions fit the corresponding Python interpreter
-    version and you have a recent enough GTK+ runtime. The python version used
+    version and you have a relatively recent GTK+ runtime. The python version used
     to build those extensions is written in the installer name (e.g. 'py2.6' for
     Python 2.6).</li>
 </ul>
 
-<p>A great companion to develop your PyGTK applications is the
+<p>A great companion for helping you develop your PyGTK applications is the
 <a href="http://ftp.gnome.org/pub/GNOME/binaries/win32/glade3/";>Glade</a>
 user interface designer.</p>
 
@@ -106,8 +106,8 @@ needed to run it.</p>
     <li><a href="ftp://ftp.gtk.org/pub/gtk/python/v1.2/";>ftp://ftp.gtk.org/pub/gtk/python/v1.2/</a></li>
     </ul>
 
-    <p>Anyhow, if you are writing a new program, it is strongly recommended that
-    you use the latest GTK+ 2.x version of PyGTK instead.</p>
+    <p>If you are writing a new program, we strongly recommend that
+    you use the latest GTK+ 2.x.</p>
 
 <h3>Build PyGTK!</h3>