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[gimp-help-2] Reviewed circuit.xml for more fluent English (I hope)

commit aae5c74275560ac74837efaea162455832f3f3fe
Author: Julien Hardelin <jm hard wanadoo fr>
Date:   Mon May 3 07:49:21 2010 +0200

    Reviewed circuit.xml for more fluent English (I hope)

 po/fr/filters/render.po        |   83 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 src/filters/render/circuit.xml |   50 ++++++++++++------------
 2 files changed, 69 insertions(+), 64 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/po/fr/filters/render.po b/po/fr/filters/render.po
index dc11dc2..e478508 100644
--- a/po/fr/filters/render.po
+++ b/po/fr/filters/render.po
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: GIMP-2.6-HELP\n"
-"POT-Creation-Date: 2010-05-01 07:46+0200\n"
-"PO-Revision-Date: 2010-04-27 08:31+0200\n"
+"POT-Creation-Date: 2010-05-03 07:33+0200\n"
+"PO-Revision-Date: 2010-05-03 08:31+0200\n"
 "Last-Translator: julien <jm hard wanadoo fr>\n"
 "Language-Team:  none\n"
 "MIME-Version: 1.0\n"
@@ -3746,7 +3746,7 @@ msgstr "Après application du filtre"
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:33(para)
 msgid ""
-"<guimenuitem>Circuit</guimenuitem> command is a script which fills the "
+"<guimenuitem>Circuit</guimenuitem> command is a script that fills the "
 "selected region (or alpha) with traces like those on a circuit board. The "
 "result looks a little like the back of an old circuit board. It looks even "
 "better when gradmapped with a suitable gradient. If the image is in indexed "
@@ -3754,47 +3754,46 @@ msgid ""
 msgstr ""
 "La commande <guimenuitem>Circuit</guimenuitem> est un script qui remplit la "
 "région sélectionnée (ou l'Alpha) avec un tracé rappelant celui d'un circuit "
-"automobile. Il paraît encore meilleur quand il est créé avec un dégradé "
+"imprimé. Il paraît encore meilleur quand il est créé avec un dégradé "
 "convenable. Si l'image est en mode couleurs indexées, cette entrée de menu "
 "est désactivée."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:42(para)
-msgid "This filter creates an grey level image in <acronym>RGB</acronym> mode."
+msgid "This filter creates a grey level image in <acronym>RGB</acronym> mode."
 msgstr ""
-"ce filtre crée une image en niveaux de gris en mode <acronym>RvB</acronym>."
-
+"Ce filtre crée une image en niveaux de gris en mode <acronym>RvB</acronym>."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:45(para)
-msgid "The result image is not be mattered by what image was drawn."
-msgstr "L'image résultante ne dépend guère de l'image d'origine."
+msgid "The resulting image doesn't depend on the original image."
+msgstr "L'image résultante ne dépend pas de l'image originale."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:49(para)
-msgid "This effect is achieved by the following steps:"
+msgid "This effect is achieved through the following steps:"
 msgstr "Cet effet passe par les étapes suivantes : "
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:52(para)
 msgid ""
 "First, <link linkend=\"plug-in-maze\">draw maze</link> with 5 pixels width "
-"pathways and walls by the <quote>Depth First</quote> algorithm. The pattern "
-"of maze is set by <guilabel>Circuit seed</guilabel>."
+"pathways and walls with the <quote>Depth First</quote> algorithm. The "
+"pattern of maze is set by <guilabel>Circuit seed</guilabel>."
 msgstr ""
 "Application du filtre <link linkend=\"plug-in-maze\">Labyrinthe</link> avec "
-"une largeur de 5 pixels et l'algorithme <quote>Profondeur d'abord</quote>. Le "
-"motif est aléatoire."
+"une largeur de 5 pixels et l'algorithme <quote>Profondeur d'abord</quote>. "
+"Le motif de labyrinthe dépend du <guilabel>germe du circuit</guilabel>."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:60(para)
 msgid ""
 "<link linkend=\"plug-in-oilify\">Oilify</link> this maze with a brush of "
 "<guilabel>Oilify mask size</guilabel>."
 msgstr ""
-"Application du filtre <link linkend=\"plug-in-oilify\">Peinture à "
-"l'huile</link> avec une brosse de la <guilabel>taille du masque</guilabel>."
+"Application du filtre <link linkend=\"plug-in-oilify\">Peinture à l'huile</"
+"link> avec une brosse de la <guilabel>taille du masque</guilabel>."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:66(para)
 msgid ""
-"By Sobel alogorithm, with Smear option and setting Amount to 2.0, <link "
-"linkend=\"plug-in-edge\">extract edge</link> from the oilified maze image to "
-"crowd of high contrast winding curves like as a circuit map."
+"Then apply the <link linkend=\"plug-in-edge\">extract edge</link> filter "
+"with Sobel algorithm, Smear option and Amount to 2.0, to the oilified maze "
+"image. This crowds high contrast winding curves like as a circuit map."
 msgstr ""
 "Application de <link linkend=\"plug-in-edge\">Détection du contour</link> "
 "avec l'algorithme Sobel, l'option �taler et une Quantité à 2.0."
@@ -3809,11 +3808,9 @@ msgstr ""
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:81(para)
 msgid ""
-"This script doesn't handle or color combos well, i.e. black/black doesn't "
-"work.. The effect seems to work best on odd shaped selections because of "
-"some limitations in the maze codes selection handling ablity."
-msgstr ""
-"Ce filtre semble mieux marcher avec des sélections tarabiscotées."
+"The effect seems to work best on odd shaped selections because of some "
+"limitations in the maze codes selection handling ability."
+msgstr "Ce filtre semble mieux marcher avec des sélections tarabiscotées."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:92(para)
 msgid ""
@@ -3822,8 +3819,8 @@ msgid ""
 "guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Circuit...</guimenuitem></menuchoice>."
 msgstr ""
 "On accède à ce filtre par <menuchoice><guimenu>Filtres</"
-"guimenu><guisubmenu>Rendu</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Circuit...</guimenuitem>"
-"</menuchoice>."
+"guimenu><guisubmenu>Rendu</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Circuit...</guimenuitem></"
+"menuchoice>."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:105(title)
 msgid "<quote>Circuit</quote> filter options"
@@ -3835,9 +3832,9 @@ msgstr "Taille de masque"
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:119(para)
 msgid ""
-"By this option you can set the option value of the <link linkend=\"plug-in-"
-"oilify\">Oilify</link> filter in pixel from range 3 to 50. Larger values "
-"make lines more fuzzy. 17 is the default value."
+"With this option you can set the option value of the <link linkend=\"plug-in-"
+"oilify\">Oilify</link> filter in pixels (range 3 to 50). Larger values make "
+"lines more fuzzy. 17 is the default value."
 msgstr ""
 "Avec cette option, vous pouvez régler la valeur de l'option du filtre "
 "<quote>Peinture à l'huile</quote> de 3 à 50 pixels. Des valeurs plus grandes "
@@ -3849,7 +3846,7 @@ msgstr "Germe du circuit"
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:130(para)
 msgid ""
-"You can give a randamizing seed number between 1 and 3000000. The default "
+"You can give a randomizing seed number between 1 and 3000000. The default "
 "value is 3."
 msgstr ""
 "Vous pouvez indiquer un germe de génération de hasard entre 1 et 3000000. La "
@@ -3861,11 +3858,15 @@ msgstr "Aucun arrière-plan (seulement pour le nouveau calque"
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:139(para)
 msgid ""
-"If this option is enabled, dark pixels of the circuit are set to be "
-"transparent so that the back image is shown through these holes. This option "
-"is disabled in default settings. Setting enable on <guilabel>Separate layer</"
-"guilabel> option is required."
+"If this option is enabled, dark pixels of the circuit are made transparent "
+"so that the underlying image is shown through these holes. This option is "
+"disabled in default settings. The <guilabel>Separate layer</guilabel> option "
+"is required."
 msgstr ""
+"Si cette option est cochée, les pixels sombres du circuit sont rendus "
+"transparents, de telle sorte que l'image sous jacente soit visible à travers "
+"ces trous. Cette option est désactivée par défaut. L'option "
+"<guilabel>Nouveau calque</guilabel> est requise."
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:148(term)
 msgid "Keep selection"
@@ -3873,8 +3874,9 @@ msgstr "Conserver la sélection"
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:150(para)
 msgid ""
-"If an active selection is given when this script is called, you can keep the "
-"selection by this option. This option is enabled in default settings."
+"If an active selection exists when this script is called, you can keep the "
+"selection and its marching ants with this option. This option is enabled in "
+"default settings."
 msgstr ""
 "Si une sélection existe quand ce script est appelé, vous pouvez la garder "
 "grâce à cette option, qui est activée par défaut."
@@ -3885,9 +3887,9 @@ msgstr "Nouveau calque"
 
 #: src/filters/render/circuit.xml:160(para)
 msgid ""
-"If this option is not checked, the generated texture is drawn on the base "
-"layer. When this option is enabled (in default), this script adds a layer "
-"which circuit texture is drawn on."
+"If this option is not checked, the generated texture is drawn on the active "
+"layer. When this option is enabled (in default), this script adds a layer to "
+"draw the circuit texture is on."
 msgstr ""
 "Si cette option n'est pas cochée, la structure générée est tracée sur le "
 "calque actif. Quand cette option est cochée (par défaut), ce script ajoute "
@@ -3984,3 +3986,6 @@ msgstr ""
 #: src/filters/render/checkerboard.xml:0(None)
 msgid "translator-credits"
 msgstr "Julien Hardelin, jhardlin{AT}wanadoo{POINT}fr, 2008, 2009, 2010"
+
+#~ msgid "The result image is not be mattered by what image was drawn."
+#~ msgstr "L'image résultante ne dépend guère de l'image d'origine."
diff --git a/src/filters/render/circuit.xml b/src/filters/render/circuit.xml
index 0420c18..f523ab5 100644
--- a/src/filters/render/circuit.xml
+++ b/src/filters/render/circuit.xml
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
     <para>
-      <guimenuitem>Circuit</guimenuitem> command is a script which fills
+      <guimenuitem>Circuit</guimenuitem> command is a script that fills
       the selected region (or alpha) with traces like those on a circuit
       board.  The result looks a little like the back of an old circuit
       board.  It looks even better when gradmapped with a suitable gradient.
@@ -40,18 +40,18 @@
     </para>
     <note>
       <para>
-        This filter creates an grey level image in <acronym>RGB</acronym> mode.
+        This filter creates a grey level image in <acronym>RGB</acronym> mode.
       </para>
       <para>
-        The result image is not be mattered by what image was drawn.
+        The resulting image doesn't depend on the original image.
       </para>
     </note>
-    <para>This effect is achieved by the following steps:</para>
+    <para>This effect is achieved through the following steps:</para>
     <procedure>
       <step>
         <para>
           First, <link linkend="plug-in-maze">draw maze</link> with 5 pixels
-          width pathways and walls by the <quote>Depth First</quote>
+          width pathways and walls with the <quote>Depth First</quote>
           algorithm.  The pattern of maze is set by <guilabel>Circuit
           seed</guilabel>.
         </para>
@@ -64,10 +64,10 @@
       </step>
       <step>
         <para>
-          By Sobel alogorithm, with Smear option and setting Amount to 2.0,
-          <link linkend="plug-in-edge">extract edge</link> from the oilified
-          maze image to crowd of high contrast winding curves like as a
-          circuit map.
+          Then apply the <link linkend="plug-in-edge">extract edge</link>
+          filter with Sobel algorithm, Smear option and Amount to 2.0,
+          to the oilified maze image. This crowds high contrast winding curves
+          like as a circuit map.
         </para>
       </step>
       <step>
@@ -79,10 +79,10 @@
     </procedure>
     <tip>
       <para>
-        This script doesn't handle or color combos well, i.e. black/black
-        doesn't work..
+        <!--This script doesn't handle or color combos well, i.e. black/black
+        doesn't work. (I don't understand this)-->
         The effect seems to work best on odd shaped selections because of
-        some limitations in the maze codes selection handling ablity.
+        some limitations in the maze codes selection handling ability.
       </para>
     </tip>
   </sect3>
@@ -117,9 +117,9 @@
         <term>Oilify mask size</term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            By this option you can set the option value of the
-            <link linkend="plug-in-oilify">Oilify</link> filter in pixel
-            from range 3 to 50.  Larger values make lines more fuzzy.
+            With this option you can set the option value of the
+            <link linkend="plug-in-oilify">Oilify</link> filter in pixels
+            (range 3 to 50).  Larger values make lines more fuzzy.
             17 is the default value.
           </para>
         </listitem>
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
         <term>Circuit seed</term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            You can give a randamizing seed number between 1 and 3000000.
+            You can give a randomizing seed number between 1 and 3000000.
             The default value is 3.
           </para>
         </listitem>
@@ -137,10 +137,10 @@
         <term>No background (only for separate layer)</term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            If this option is enabled, dark pixels of the circuit are set
-            to be transparent so that the back image is shown through these
-            holes.  This option is disabled in default settings.  Setting
-            enable on <guilabel>Separate layer</guilabel> option is required.
+            If this option is enabled, dark pixels of the circuit are made
+            transparent so that the underlying image is shown through
+            these holes.  This option is disabled in default settings.
+            The <guilabel>Separate layer</guilabel> option is required.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -148,9 +148,9 @@
         <term>Keep selection</term>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            If an active selection is given when this script is called,
-            you can keep the selection by this option.  This option is
-            enabled in default settings.
+            If an active selection exists when this script is called,
+            you can keep the selection and its marching ants with this option.
+            This option is enabled in default settings.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -159,8 +159,8 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
             If this option is not checked, the generated texture is drawn
-            on the base layer.  When this option is enabled (in default),
-            this script adds a layer which circuit texture is drawn on.
+            on the active layer.  When this option is enabled (in default),
+            this script adds a layer to draw the circuit texture is on.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
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