[glib] Reword a doc comment

[Matthias Clasen <matthiasc src gnome org>]

commit 9971686b7e0d3a3f8416534a55e246bbfd901d0a
Author: Matthias Clasen <mclasen redhat com>
Date:   Tue Jun 15 00:50:36 2010 -0400

    Reword a doc comment
    
    To take out some awkward wording.

 glib/gmarkup.c |   11 +++++------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/glib/gmarkup.c b/glib/gmarkup.c
index 74be8cb..53edae5 100644
--- a/glib/gmarkup.c
+++ b/glib/gmarkup.c
@@ -2092,12 +2092,11 @@ append_escaped_text (GString     *str,
  * from being processed according to the XML rules for normalization
  * of line endings and attribute values.
  *
- * Note also that if given a string containing them, this function
- * will produce character references in the range of &amp;#x1; ..
- * &amp;#x1f; for all control sequences except for tabstop, newline
- * and carriage return.  The character references in this range are
- * not valid XML 1.0, but they are valid XML 1.1 and will be accepted
- * by the GMarkup parser.
+ * Note also that this function will produce character references in
+ * the range of &amp;#x1; ... &amp;#x1f; for all control sequences
+ * except for tabstop, newline and carriage return.  The character
+ * references in this range are not valid XML 1.0, but they are
+ * valid XML 1.1 and will be accepted by the GMarkup parser.
  * 
  * Return value: a newly allocated string with the escaped text
  **/