[gnome-packagekit] Fix some i18n bugs. Fixes #606629



commit cba33a7575a9091825aa8556dcaf0d4fd82ff4ce
Author: Richard Hughes <richard hughsie com>
Date:   Wed Jan 20 17:23:05 2010 +0000

    Fix some i18n bugs. Fixes #606629

 help/C/gnome-packagekit.xml |   18 +++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/gnome-packagekit.xml b/help/C/gnome-packagekit.xml
index 9d30083..af947fb 100644
--- a/help/C/gnome-packagekit.xml
+++ b/help/C/gnome-packagekit.xml
@@ -299,15 +299,12 @@
       You can limit the amount of software packages that is shown by several criteria.
     </para>
     <para>
-      To see only installed or only uninstalled software packages, choose the
-      corresponding menuitem in the <menuchoice><guimenu>Filters</guimenu>
-      <guisubmenu>Installed</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu.
-      To see only installed or only uninstalled packages, choose the
+      To see only installed or only uninstalled software, choose the
       corresponding menuitem in the <menuchoice><guimenu>Filters</guimenu>
       <guisubmenu>Installed</guisubmenu></menuchoice> menu.
     </para>
     <para>
-      To see only software packages containing applications with a graphical user
+      To see only software containing applications with a graphical user
       interface or only applications with a commandline interface, choose a
       filter from the <menuchoice><guimenu>Filters</guimenu>
       <guisubmenu>Graphical</guisubmenu></menuchoice>
@@ -318,7 +315,7 @@
       application and can get this wrong when a package has dependencies like gtk2+.
     </para></note>
     <para>
-      To see only packages that qualify as free software, choose the
+      To see only software that qualify as free software, choose the
       corresponding menu item from the <menuchoice><guimenu>Filters</guimenu>
       <guisubmenu>Free</guisubmenu></menuchoice>
       menu. Currently, PackageKit considers a package to be free software
@@ -331,7 +328,7 @@
     <title>Searching for software</title>
     <para>
       The search entry and <guibutton>Find</guibutton> button let you search
-      for software packages. The icon inside the entry indicates what kind
+      for software. The icon inside the entry indicates what kind
       of search is performed. By clicking on it, you can select to search for
       a string that is contained in package name, the package description, or
       search for the name of a file contained in the package.
@@ -345,7 +342,7 @@
   <para>
     The software repository viewer allows you to enable or disable software
     sources - also known as <quote>repositories</quote>. Repositories
-    are collections of software packages that are known to work together and
+    are collections of software that are known to work together and
     are compatible with your operating system. Apart from the repositories for
     the operating system itself, there are third-party repositories offering
     additional software for many Linux distributions - check your
@@ -378,7 +375,7 @@
     this file type are shown.
   </para>
   <para>
-    At this time, only a limited number of packages will be shown, as they will
+    At this time, only a limited number of results will be shown, as they will
     need to be rebuilt by the distro to support the extra data needed by PackageKit.
     This will happen automatically, and soon all suitable applications will be shown.
   </para>
@@ -663,7 +660,6 @@
   <para>
     Automatic updates can be performed in the background system wide using the
     PackageKit-cron package.
-    This package contains a cron job that as well as a configuration file.
     The settings are controlled via the configuration file at
     <filename>/etc/sysconfig/packagekit-background</filename>.
     You can set it to just check for updates or perform the updates
@@ -766,7 +762,7 @@
     This application tries to reuse dialogs as much as possible, so that there
     is a repeatable and consistent user interface when managing packages.
     In the following subsections, some of the dialogs will be explained further,
-    often with examples or Internet links.
+    often with examples or web links.
   </para>
 
   <section id="dialog-installing-private-files">



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