[postr] [doc] Updated introduction and login documentation



commit bb2dcb3f8ed53453b8f7abd5fd0b1560a8b1586e
Author: Germán Póo-Caamaño <gpoo gnome org>
Date:   Wed Dec 8 01:55:51 2010 -0800

    [doc] Updated introduction and login documentation
    
    Signed-off-by: Germán Póo-Caamaño <gpoo gnome org>

 help/C/introduction.page |   12 ++++++++++--
 help/C/login.page        |   43 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 2 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 052a9a3..c152322 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -21,8 +21,16 @@
 <title>Introduction</title>
 
   <p>
-    <app>Postr</app> is simple and useful tool for uploading pictures to Flickr.com for the
-    GNOME Desktop.
+    <app>Postr</app> is a tool for uploading pictures to <link href="http://flickr.com/";> Flickr</link> for the GNOME Desktop. <app>Postr</app> helps you to share your pictures with your family, friends, contacts or everyone.
+  </p>
+  <p>
+    <app>Postr</app> supports the most common properties of a picture in Flickr, such as title, description and tags.  It also supports groups, where you can share your pictures to the groups you are already subscribed in Flickr.
+  </p>
+  <p>
+    Using <app>Postr</app> you can define a set for your pictures, either new or existent, where you can keep them organized.
+  </p>
+  <p>
+    In order to use <app>Postr</app> you need an account on <link href="http://flickr.com/";>Flickr</link>.
   </p>
 
   <figure>
diff --git a/help/C/login.page b/help/C/login.page
index 1cd448a..4e965cf 100644
--- a/help/C/login.page
+++ b/help/C/login.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
       id="login">
 <info>
   <link type="guide" xref="index#getting-started"/>
-  <desc>Log in on Flickr</desc>
+  <desc>Connecting <app>Postr</app> to your Flickr account</desc>
   <revision pkgversion="0.13" version="0.1" date="2009-11-13" status="incomplete"/>
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Germán Póo-Caamaño</name>
@@ -18,17 +18,34 @@
 </info>
 <title>Log in on Flickr</title>
 
-  <p>Flickr must authorize to <app>Postr</app> the access to your
-  information before doing anything else.</p>
+  <p>
+    <app>Postr</app> requires authorization from your Flickr account to
+    upload your photos.  In order to connect <app>Postr</app> with your
+    Flickr account, the first time you run <app>Postr</app>, you will be
+    asked to login to Flickr with the following dialog:
+  </p>
 
-    <figure>
-        <title><app>Postr</app> Login to Flickr window</title>
-        <desc><app>Postr</app> Switch account and Login to Flickr window</desc>
-        <media type="image" src="figures/postr-login-flickr.png" mime="image/png" style="right"></media>
-    </figure>
-    <steps>
-        <item><p>Click on Login to Flickr. This action will open the Flickr authentication page on your default web browser.</p></item>
-        <item><p>Follow the instructions on Flickr website to authorize <app>Postr</app></p></item>
-        <item><p>Back to Login to Flickr window on <app>Postr</app> and click on Continue</p></item>
-    </steps>
+  <figure>
+    <title><app>Postr</app> Login to Flickr window</title>
+    <desc><app>Postr</app> Switch account and Login to Flickr window</desc>
+    <media type="image" src="figures/postr-login-flickr.png" mime="image/png" style="right"></media>
+  </figure>
+  <steps>
+    <item><p>Click on <gui>Login to Flickr</gui>. This action will
+    open the Flickr authentication page on your default web
+    browser.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Follow the instructions on Flickr website to authorize
+    <app>Postr</app>.  The permissions requested are for read and write,
+    but not delete.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Go back to <gui>Login to Flickr</gui> window on
+    <app>Postr</app> and click on <gui>Continue</gui>.</p></item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <note style="tip">
+    <p>
+      To use <app>Postr</app> with another Flickr account, you have to
+      to select <guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>Switch user...</gui></guiseq>
+      and repeat the procedure.
+    </p>
+  </note>
 </page>



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