[empathy/gnome-2-30] [help] Some updates to the help based on the new version



commit ab845071a85d6776cafa7e59b8ece198a2f9c0a6
Author: Milo Casagrande <milo ubuntu com>
Date:   Thu Apr 22 21:50:23 2010 +0200

    [help] Some updates to the help based on the new version

 help/C/account-irc.page    |    8 +++++---
 help/C/account-jabber.page |    2 +-
 help/C/add-account.page    |    3 ++-
 help/C/audio-call.page     |    4 +++-
 help/C/create-account.page |   17 ++++++++++++++++-
 help/C/irc-manage.page     |    6 ++++++
 help/C/remove-account.page |    3 ++-
 help/C/video-call.page     |    4 +++-
 8 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/account-irc.page b/help/C/account-irc.page
index af41920..85f23d0 100644
--- a/help/C/account-irc.page
+++ b/help/C/account-irc.page
@@ -4,12 +4,14 @@
       id="account-irc">
 
   <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="irc-manage#manage"/> 
     <desc>Additional information necessary for connecting to IRC networks.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="2.28" version="0.1" date="2009-08-31" status="review">
       <!--
       <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
       -->
     </revision>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.2" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
@@ -26,7 +28,7 @@
 -->
   </info>
 
-  <title>IRC Account Details</title>
+  <title>IRC account details</title>
 
   <p>IRC accounts require different information than many other types of
   accounts.  To create an IRC account, you must specify at least an IRC
@@ -34,8 +36,8 @@
   provide for an IRC account.</p>
 
   <note style="info package">
-    <p>You must have the <sys>telepathy-idle</sys> package installed
-    in order to use IRC in <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+    <p>You must have the <sys>telepathy-idle</sys> package installed to use IRC 
+    in <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
   </note>
 
   <terms>
diff --git a/help/C/account-jabber.page b/help/C/account-jabber.page
index efa22d1..116d7d1 100644
--- a/help/C/account-jabber.page
+++ b/help/C/account-jabber.page
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
 -->
   </info>
 
-  <title>Jabber Account Details</title>
+  <title>Jabber account details</title>
 
   <p>Most Jabber accounts will require only a login ID and a password
   to connect.  For some accounts or on certain types of networks, you
diff --git a/help/C/add-account.page b/help/C/add-account.page
index f9d7763..86145c0 100644
--- a/help/C/add-account.page
+++ b/help/C/add-account.page
@@ -15,6 +15,7 @@
       -->
     </revision>
     <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.3" date="2010-02-03" status="review"/>    
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.4" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>    
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -68,7 +69,7 @@
     </item>    
     <item>
       <p>
-        Click <gui style="button">Apply</gui>.
+        Click <gui style="button">Log in</gui>.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/help/C/audio-call.page b/help/C/audio-call.page
index dd66ce3..9ed99c3 100644
--- a/help/C/audio-call.page
+++ b/help/C/audio-call.page
@@ -54,7 +54,9 @@
       total conversation time.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To end the conversation, choose <guiseq><gui style="menu">Call</gui><gui style="menuitem">Hang up</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>
+        To end the conversation, click on <gui style="button">Hang up</gui>.
+      </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
   <note style="tip">
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index c478d7d..19232e8 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
       <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-09-02" status="done"/>
       -->
     </revision>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.3" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -40,6 +41,20 @@
   <p>This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of
   accounts.  Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well
   as any additional information you need to connect with <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+  
+  <section id="facebook">
+    <title>Facebook</title>
+    <p>
+      Facebook is one of the most used social network.  It provides users with 
+      the opportunity to create their own profile, and to communicate with their
+      friends. 
+    </p>
+    <p>
+      In order to use Facebook to communicate with your friends, you will need 
+      to create a new account from the website: 
+      <link href="http://www.facebook.com";>www.facebook.com</link>.
+    </p>
+  </section>
 
   <section id="jabber">
     <title>Jabber</title>
@@ -101,7 +116,7 @@
     you will need to choose a new nickname.</p>
 
     <p>Some IRC networks use a service called NickServ to allow users to protect
-    thier nicknames.  See <link xref="irc-nick-password"/> for more information.</p>
+    their nicknames.  See <link xref="irc-nick-password"/> for more information.</p>
 
     <p>Some IRC servers are password protected.  You will need to know the password
     to connect to these servers.  Generally, these are private IRC networks.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/irc-manage.page b/help/C/irc-manage.page
index 1cd834c..2f9cbae 100644
--- a/help/C/irc-manage.page
+++ b/help/C/irc-manage.page
@@ -14,6 +14,7 @@
       <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
       -->
     </revision>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.3" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -31,6 +32,11 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Internet Relay Chat (IRC)</title>
+  
+  <note style="info package">
+    <p>You must have the <sys>telepathy-idle</sys> package installed to use IRC 
+    in <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+  </note>
 
   <section id="manage" style="2column">
     <info>
diff --git a/help/C/remove-account.page b/help/C/remove-account.page
index 2e025e8..ff2d610 100644
--- a/help/C/remove-account.page
+++ b/help/C/remove-account.page
@@ -13,6 +13,7 @@
       <e:review by="shaunm gnome org" date="2009-08-31" status="done"/>
       -->
     </revision>
+    <revision pkgversion="2.30" version="0.4" date="2010-04-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
@@ -46,7 +47,7 @@
       left side of the window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click on the trash icon next to the account name to remove the account.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui style="button">Remove</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>A dialog will be shown asking for confirmation. Click the <gui>Remove</gui>
diff --git a/help/C/video-call.page b/help/C/video-call.page
index 1e8a78e..114346b 100644
--- a/help/C/video-call.page
+++ b/help/C/video-call.page
@@ -52,7 +52,9 @@
       total conversation time.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>To end the conversation, choose <guiseq><gui style="menu">Call</gui><gui style="menuitem">Hang up</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>
+        To end the conversation, click on <gui style="button">Hang up</gui>.
+      </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
   <note style="tip">



[Date Prev][Date Next]   [Thread Prev][Thread Next]   [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]