[gnomeweb-wml] Fixed some spelling mistakes and massaged a few of the paragraphs a bit.

[Og B. Maciel <ogmaciel src gnome org>]

commit d0209c205125b3534ba6ee450d26b75f148d3b5f
Author: Og B. Maciel <ogmaciel gnome org>
Date:   Thu Sep 17 13:03:36 2009 -0400

    Fixed some spelling mistakes and massaged a few of the paragraphs a bit.

 projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml |   58 +++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 29 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml b/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml
index 8dd217a..d740faf 100644
--- a/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml
+++ b/projects.gnome.org/cheese/tour.shtml
@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Cheese is an program for the GNOME Desktop which allows you to take
+          Cheese is a program for the GNOME Desktop which allows you to take
           photos, videos, and anything else you can think of with your webcam.
           <br/>
           Just start it up
-          and shoot! Gather all of your friends around, have some fun! Share
-          your taken photos and videos with 'em!
+          and shoot! Gather all of your friends around, have some fun! When you're
+          done, share your photos and videos with 'em!
           </p>
         </div>
 
@@ -38,11 +38,11 @@
           </div>
           <p>
           The countdown widget will let you get into
-          position, or wreck everything, before the photo that you want is
-          taken. The visual countdown will appear at the bottom of the image,
-          and will give you time to press the take photo button, and
-          get ready! So if you need to put your eye makeup on, be fast, you
-          just have 3 seconds!
+          position, or wreck everything, before the photo is taken.
+          The visual countdown will appear at the bottom of the image,
+          and will give you time to press the "Take photo" button, and
+          get ready! So if you need to put on your eye makeup or fix your hair,
+          do it fast! You only have 3 seconds!
           </p>
         </div>
 
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Sick and tired of looking at the same face over and over again,
-          want to be something else? Cheese allows
+          Sick and tired of looking at the same face over and over again?
+          Want it to be something else? Cheese allows
           you to add many different effects to photos, even multiple at a time! There are
           heaps of effect combinations to choose from that will keep you smiling.
           Morph yourself into Hulk or a nice pink alien, or even pile up effects in
@@ -73,13 +73,13 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Finished taking photos and movies? Then go ahead and share your files to your
+          Finished taking photos and movies? Then go ahead and share your files with your
           friends and family! You can export them to F-Spot, put them on Flickr, mail
           them or use them as your account photo in GNOME. You can also save them to your
-          disk to do anything you want with them, the possibilities are endless.
+          disk to do anything you want with them... the possibilities are endless!
           With nautilus-sendto installed, you even have further
-          possibilieties to share your photos and movies!
-          Cheese makes it super easy to share yor photos and videos.
+          possibilities to share your photos and movies!
+          Cheese makes it super easy to share your photos and videos.
           </p>
         </div>
 
@@ -93,12 +93,12 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Especially for Netbook users we have optimized our User Interface
+          We have optimized our User Interface especially for Netbook users
           in order to have an awesome experience on small displays too.
           Sitting in a cafe together with your friends, travelling in a train or
           just sitting in a hotel lobby, these are all great places to try out
-          Cheese! No excuse anymore, most Netbook's have already a webcam
-          integrated.
+          Cheese! There are no excuses anymore, as most Netbook's come with an
+          integrated webcam.
           </p>
         </div>
 
@@ -110,11 +110,11 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Cheese gets a new functionality: the burst mode!
+          Cheese got a new feature: the burst mode!
           From now on you can watch foxes walking in your garden, people
           getting drunk over time at your party or have many photos to laugh
           afterwards. Just set the amount of photos you want to be taken and
-          the time delay and cheese will take them.
+          the time delay and Cheese will take them.
           </p>
         </div>
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Cheese does not only allow you to take great photos, it also allows you to take
+          Cheese does not only allow you to take great photos, but it also allows you to take
           videos. Effects, sharing, and everything that you can do with photos you can
           also do with videos as well. Instead of preparing for that one
           moment, invite some friends, record your session and laugh about it afterwards.
@@ -149,11 +149,11 @@
           You have several webcams? You can't stop taking photos of yourself
           and your friends? The only reason you have USB-Ports is to attach
           Webcams?<br/>
-          With Cheese 2.24, you now can switch between your installed webcams
+          With Cheese 2.28, you now can switch between your installed webcams
           with just one click! Just open the shiny new preference dialog and
-          choose your favoured webcam. You can also set the resolution of
-          your webcam there! But there is more, you can also configure webcam
-          settings, like the brightness, contrast and much more! Now get all your
+          choose your favored webcam. You can also set the resolution of
+          your webcam there! But there is more! You can also configure webcam
+          settings, such as the brightness, contrast and much more! Now get all your
           webcams out of your locker, attach them to your computer and play with them!
           </p>
         </div>
@@ -168,8 +168,8 @@
             </a>
           </div>
           <p>
-          Did you ever want to set up a computer with Cheese on it in the
-          lobby of your office? Did you ever want to have Cheese running at a
+          Have you ever wanted to set up a computer with Cheese on it in the
+          lobby of your office? Have you ever wanted to have Cheese running at a
           party with a lot of people? This and much more is just a click
           away: enter the fullscreen mode and enjoy Cheese on the whole
           display! Attention: If you try this at a party, this can lead to
@@ -188,10 +188,10 @@
           </div>
           -->
           <p>
-          Don't stop there, find out what you can do with Cheese today! Install
+          Don't just sit there, find out what you can do with Cheese today! Install
           Cheese and have fun, send us your funniest photos and videos, share
-          your fun with others. If you want more features or have some great
-          ideas what we could do to make Cheese even rock more, do not hesitate
+          your fun with others! If you want more features or have some great
+          ideas on what we could do to make Cheese rock even more, do not hesitate
           to contact us or to fill a bug at our bug tracking website.
           </p>
         </div>