[release-notes/gnome-2-28] Updated gnome-volume-manager description

[Paul Cutler <pcutler src gnome org>]

commit ea035da67802bfa90c7dd229e67c6c3fc9059267
Author: Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>
Date:   Wed Sep 9 12:44:02 2009 -0500

    Updated gnome-volume-manager description

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   32 ++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 4b7f5a5..815c5b6 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -48,9 +48,8 @@
 	 <title>Track Your Time Better</title>
 
 	 <para>
-	  The <application>Time Tracker</application> applet, also known as Project Hamster, 
-	  was included in GNOME one year ago to help users track their time and tasks, 
-	  and with GNOME &gnomeversion; includes a number of new improvements.
+	  The <application>Time Tracker</application> applet, which helps you track your time and tasks, 
+	   includes a number of new improvements.
 	 </para>
 	 
 	 <para>An all-new Overview screen is now included, which merges the category and period
@@ -58,8 +57,8 @@
 	 making it easy to view the proportion of time used to complete tasks.
 	 </para>
 	 
-	 <para>Other feature updates include improved autocomplete support allowing the 
-	 ability to update the start time on the fly, improved support for late-night workers, and
+	 <para>Other feature updates include improved autocomplete support allowing you
+	  to update the start time on the fly, improved support for late-night workers, and
 	 the ability to add earlier tasks that have been completed.  Lastly, the export functionality
 	 has a number of improvements, including the ability to filter activities by category and date
 	 prior to export, and new simple export types:  iCal to import into Evolution, 
@@ -102,7 +101,7 @@
 	 
 	 <para>
 	  The conversaton dialog now supports a number of new themes, including Adium message styles.
-	  Other improvements include users in the user list now have a tooltip; 
+	  "Users" in the user list now have a tooltip; 
 	  the user list in chat rooms can be hidden; the Contact menu has been removed
 	  from the Conversation menu; and if your name is mentioned 
 	  in a chat room or conversation, that tab's text will become red.
@@ -113,16 +112,16 @@
 	 </para>
 	 
 	 <para>Users are now able to share their desktop with Empathy contacts using the GNOME Remote Desktop
-	 Viewer, <application>Vinagre</application>.
+	 Viewer, <application>Vino</application>.
 	 
 	 <!-- Fixme - expand on the how to share via 2 clicks and add screenshot-->
 	 </para>
 	 
 	 <para>Geolocation support using Geoclue has been added for XMPP contacts, such as Jabber and Google Talk. 
-	 You can view a contact's location by hovering your mouse over their contact name, in the information
-	 dialog or on the Map View.  Empathy also supports a reduced accuracy mode for users who wish additional 
-	 privacy.
-	 </para>
+	 You can view a contact's location by hovering your mouse over their contact name in the contact list, 
+	 in the information dialog or in the Map View.  
+	 Empathy also supports a reduced accuracy mode for users who wish additional privacy.  
+	 Google Talk users can view a contact's location, but cannot publish their location as Google does not use PEP.</para>
 	 
 	 <para>Empathy also includes all-new documentation focused on helping
 	 users to learn how to perform specifics tasks within Empathy.
@@ -136,14 +135,14 @@
 
 		<para>
 		 The GNOME Web Browser, <application>Epiphany</application>, has switched to Webkit from Gecko for 
-		 its rendering engine.  While this change should be invisible to you with the exception of a few
-		 performance enhancements, long term the switch to Webkit will have significant benefits to 
-		 those using Epiphany.  Switching to WebKit also fixes a number of long standing bugs in Epiphany 
+		 its rendering engine.  With the exception of some performance enhancements, 
+		 this change should be invisible to users. Long-term, the switch to WebKit will have significant 
+		 benefits to Epiphany users.  Switching to WebKit also fixes a number of long standing bugs in Epiphany 
 		 due to the old Gecko-based backend.  You are encouraged to test this new version to confirm 
 		 if your older problems have been solved.
 		</para>
 		
-		<para>With the change to Webkit, one bug users may experience is Epiphany not being able to save
+		<para>One bug users may experience in Epiphany due to the change to Webkit, is not being able to save
 		logins and passwords in forms.  This bug will be fixed during the 2.30 development cycle.</para>
 
 	</sect2>	 
@@ -204,7 +203,8 @@
 	 <title>Fade In and Out</title>
 
 	 <para>
-	  <application>GNOME Volume Control</application> has added subwoofer and fade support for users with supported speakers.
+	  <application>GNOME Volume Control</application> has added 
+	  the ability for you to control a subwoofer and channel fading.
 	  Also new is when changing settings, changes are now instantly applied.
 	 </para>